Secluded Zone

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ChocolateThunder, Dec 28, 2017.

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  1. In my secluded zone,
    Where the sun don't shine,
    Admiring a treasure I call my own.
    My most prized possession.
    Climax reaches utmost erection,
    As visuals form in the section.
    A place where I reside,
    Where time doesn't exist.
    Bonds form and worlds become,
    A unique type of custom.
    Soft spoken voices,
    Dance around in the interior.
    Sweet meaningless words,
    Many adjectives and verbs.
    Introduced to many perks,
    Yet what lies in the dark,
    Is a true intention that lurks.
    One touch is euphoria,
    Suppressed desires,
    Become wild fires.
    In this intangible area,
    Delirious from the hysteria.
    Where ideas form and collide,
    Arguments transpire on the inside.
    Decisions made constantly,
    What does the outside,
    Want from me?
     
  2. Is this a metaphor of what you do while you rp :?
     
  3. If you read it entirely, you'll see it's about inside my mind. Secluded means solitude. "Where ideas form and collide," is an example. You're selectively reading. Just because I'm a freak doesn't mean I'd make a poem about sexual intercourse, miss. Smh, have trust that I wouldn't post it on forums at least
     
  4. Now explain why it's a 4/10.
     
  5. Don't gotta explain my opinion
     
  6. This is what I was talking about. No logical explanation why, except the fact that you dislike me.
     
  7. LOL
     
  8. Can I get a moderator's assistance? Don't 14 Year olds automatically get expelled? If so, I'd like to report Alicia.
     
  9. Bet if Alicia posted a pic of herself, you would drool all over that phone.
     
  10. Have you seen her? No. I bet a pic of her wouldn't even have my flow of blood rushing. (No need to explain, since you should already kno).
     
  11. Not feeling it... sounded like typical WPS. Put a guitar behind it and let the head-banging ensue. And to further break that down... it’s when you over explain something that is easily grasped through imagery instead of using grandiose vocabulary. This is why I’ve always held impressionalist in higher regard than photograhers. Impressionalist are honest. Photographers are like magicians.
     
  12. So entitled. 0/10 tbh. Explanation: you're you.
     
  13. Shut up. Have your own opinion without piggy backing off of someone else for once.
     
  14. That is my own opinion. If it wasn't i'd give it the same score as broncoo.
     
  15. You’ve been dismissed already. Get over it and fast.
     
  16. Jaco must be giving you the good suck.
     
  17. You’re a follower. Tell your leader and I might listen.
     
  18. "But how can you hear if i'm typing?!?!?!?!" — ChocolateThunder
     
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