Hey all you readers! This is my first poem page that I have ever done so please tell me if I need to improve or just comment ------------------------------------------------ Eternal Romance Without the Sun there is no morning, Without the Moon there is night I have searched for a beautiful women like you So I cant lose my sight of you Your hair resembles the night sky Though it has no stars You shine with your own brilliance Unaware of those who may disown ur beauty The jealous hearts of others dont slow you down But motivate your esteem to rise higher If I should die before I wake, and never again see your beauty The bond we share shall no seize For our love will forever stay eternal Im glad to have had to have a love To which what makes my heart dance Let us stay together and forever share Our Eternal Romance.
I like it, just maybe type with full words. :3 For example: 'ur' becomes 'your' or 'you're' etc. 'Im' becomes 'i'm'. But yeah, it's pretty good.