There I was again. Running away. Away from them. Away from the people they sent after me. From life. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I am Ravyn Serenity A'zeira. 14 years old. Only child. Orphan. My birth parents? Murdered. My life? A living hell. I can still remember the night I lost everything. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was 8 at the time. I was snuggled up in my nice warm bed. Around midnight, i heard a noise. A noise that would change my life forever. A scream. Then a gunshot. I shot straight up in bed. I was scared. Really scared. I crept slowly out of bed and over to my door. I opened it a little bit. I could see into my parents' room. What I saw would haunt me forever. My mother, lying dead on the floor. A man holding a knife to my fathers throat. I couldn't bear to watch what happened next. I turned away from the door. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So, what do you think so far? This is my first story. Is there anywhere I can improve? If there is don't hesitate to tell me. Your opinions are important!! Shout out to RavynSuPham, who helped me with the name, and to TheAndi, TiffanyHwang7 and Joyce1234. You guys are the awesomest friends ever!!
Thankyou so much!! It's gunna have a lot of twists. I did write a whole lot more in notes, and then it all went away, so I started again here. I shall put more up when I get at least one more bump!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ -still in flashback- I ran around my room, picking up things I would need and put them in my brand new backpack. I ran back over to the door, looking into my parents room again. It was painful. The man was still in there. I quickly opened my door and ran to the kitchen, grabbing some food, water and the keys. I dashed over to the front door, and started to unlock it. The key got stuck. "Damn you!" I whispered to the key. I tried again. The door swung open. I looked behind me one last time. The man was walking into my room. I turned back around and ran for my life. -end of flashback-
I know u gave me ideas tiff! but I still have to put it all together!! I'll update tomorrow. I'm going to sleep now. Night