Well, I'm writing another story. And I'm proud to say it was inspired by an episode of King of the Hill Anyway, If you read it, PLEASE comment with your honest opinion on each update. I encourage constructive criticism on each update:3 Pwease... Renn; I ran, I ran faster then I even knew I could. I was pushing myself, and I could see Shale's blonde head bobbing beside me. We tagged along side the train as it chugged along, it's speed increasing every second. I tried my hardest to keep up with the train, but soon enough I felt myself falling behind. I spotted the door to the train, and a small ledge and opening that we could both fit on. I glanced at Shale, and decided that she would catch on with the plan when I moved to jump. The train was too loud for her to hear me, anyway. I darted to the side, and before I risked it all, I took a deep breath. And then I jumped. I leaped onto the train, my entire body going into overdrive. Adrenaline rushed, my heart beat x10, and I fumbled desperately for something to grab onto. And then I was there, standing at the doorway, looking back at Shale. Her pale hair was whipping furiously, and her eyes were determined. I held out my hand, and she held out hers, jumping just as I had. Her hand touched mine, and our fingers locked around eachother's. I pulled with all my strength, and tried to hoist her up. I saw panic in her eyes. Her mouth moved, franticly, but I couldn't hear her over the train. "What?!" i shouted. "My leg is stuck, Renn!" She screamed, just as her hand was wrenched from my grip. "No!" I saw a flash of blonde hair, and heard a wrenching scream as she disappeared under the train. "SHALE!" My wail echoed in my head, my brain throbbing, and my eyes filling with burning tears. She had been sucked under the train. Shale was dead.