I don't care if you don't like this story but I'm writing it anyways ------------------------------------- Dean POV: It has been 8 years since the disastrous event happened, I lost everyone who I care about and was left with nothing only with an empty soul. Back then when my parents and brother where alive, I was the happiest person you would had ever known. No one would say anything bad about me, but they had to take them away from me just because I wasn't one of them. They made fun of me because I was a deformed being having lost my left eyes when I was born. Now all I could do is mourn their death and kill to survive this unsuspecting war going on. " Dean do you know when they are gonna get here? " my partner Ace asked me as we watched the soldiers pass by. " No Ace but from my calculation the first ship is finally arriving" I answered looking at him. " do you mean where they have all the prisoners and where they have her?" He asked me again. " no she is on the second ship, well that's what my resources have told me" " should I go and ask the others to come and help us out?" " Ace stop asking so many questions and no we don't need them here only you and me, the others will just get on our way" I told him taking my gun out and aiming it at the soldier on the roof. " they are gonna figure out we are here Dean" " exactly" I said laughing as I shot the soldier and he fell dead and then the alarms sounding. " you're crazy" he yelled at me. In minutes every soldier that was surrounding the blockade came out. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If you don't like this story then don't comment on it I just wrote it for fun nothing else
:> I better see Diolanda. jkjk Just some punctuation errors, Al. Only in the quotations though. Capitalization as well.
Jack POV: I started to walk around when I started to hear gun shots. " What the heck is going on?" I asked myself looking confuse and looked at where Brenda was at. " Don't know Jack, maybe the Zar are finally going to take out those Soldier who had taken over our homeland." Brenda said to me. " The Zars those people are fools knowing full well that they will be killed." Jack said. " At least it's better than just doing nothing like us" Brenda said laughing. " Don't laugh at me Brenda, I can do something if I wanted to but nah I'm too lazy to do anything at all." " Yes Jack we all know you are a full well known lazy ass." Bekka and Nellie both said as they came in holding fire wood on their hand. " And why are both of you late?" Jack asked them. " None of your business" Nellie responded. ><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> Dean POV: " You're crazy Dean." Ace said yelling at me. " Don't care, the crazier I am the more excitement there is." I said laughing shooting each soldier that appeared on top of the blockade. " Yeah and the more dumb you become." Ace said rolling his eyes. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Short update but eh I don't care, hope you all like it(well mainly those who read it )