Revenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Magical_Rani4- (01), Aug 23, 2011.

  1. I sat there,alone,out in cold,on the street.I couldn't believe it...the love of my life,Max,had betrayed me.We had been together for three whole years and I was certain he would be the one.

    However,my thaughts were wrong...he left me for a pretty blonde.I knew as I'd seen them together kissing.Oh how I despised and envied her.

    A tear ascaped my eye and before I knew many more had.I moaned and banged my head against a wall.wishing more then ever that that max was mine and in my arms.I already missed him.He had bronze hair and a perfect smile that could make my heart melt.He also nearly always wore a tee shirt wich showed his muscular arms.

    "Rose?!" Mrs Lay (a made up name)called,snapping me out of my daydream,I guess I had been quite loud.Eventually she found me.She frantically rummaged in her handbag then ,at last,she emerged with a plaster wich she gave me to put on my head,where I had banged it against the wall.

    "What happened sweetie?"Mrs Lay asked.I closed my eyes for a second and then explained...


    -Rani44 also known as the ice cream monster

    I know it's not very good but I'm only young and it will get better later in it because then there'll be revengeim not that sure if o should cpntinue so what do guys(and girls)think?
     
  2. Continue definately  it's awesone. Can i be a character ?? 
     
  3. Ill probally do some more tomorow and then ill be on holiday for a week
     
  4. Cool  can't wait 
     
  5. Bump please read ppl
     
  6. Omg I'm in a story and I sound like a ass  
     
  7. NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  8. I deleted my update my accodent so the next one may be a while and its only to fil things in
     
  9. (1 week later)

    I yawned and got out of bed.I was staying in a hotel as my mean parents were making me go to a bording school far from my busy hometown.I was staying in a hotel as the bording school doesnt start till tomorrow.

    I sighed,thinking about max again.'snap outta it girl!'my brain told me but I just couldn't.I try not to show my sadness and hide behind a mask of smiles but it's hard....'i need to find a new boyfriend' I thaught'not another liar though'and with that in mind I headed out to explore town.

    'the town isn't very good'i said to myself,but they did have a cinema so it wasn't to bad.After a yummy macdonalds I headed to the cinema to watch 'The Hangover'.I laughed.This film was awsome!unfortunoutly it ended making me sad again as I remembered Max.I got a taxi bact to the hotel and fell asleep straight away on my bed.

    Tring Tring! I hit my alarm to turn it of and scrambled out of bed.I only had an hour to pack my things and get ready.I left my long wavy black hair down,put mascara over my eyes,which were amber,placed some lip gloss on,brushed my hair and put on my clothes."I'll wear a purple hoodie,ripped skinny jeans and traners"I whispered.quikly,I packed everything up and ran to the school.

    I stopped for a second to catch my breath before jogging to the school gate.I pushed the metal gate open to be greeted by stares.I wandered around,lost,for a few a few minute until a pretty girl with brown hair and blonde streaks in an emoish style waved at me.She jogged towards me"Hi!I'm Beth and I'm your roomate here!me and you have the day of classes today so I can show you round the school"Beth said happily.


    -ice cream monster

    It's not to good as first upload I deleted by acciden so did this when angry
     
  10. Thanksothers who wanted to be in it u will be in it next