Sooo I plan on writing an actual book, yes a book, called "rescued" and I wanna get feedback to see if it's good enough, it seems like it to me. Anyways let's get started. It's about a girl named Rachel (my character obviously) and a guy named Jason. After my father has died, a few years later my mom and my new stepdad and me move into a new place that he bought (my stepdad). So my life kinda sucks already. I do fit in at my new school I guess, not that I really care, I'm just a kid. And my stepdad is really rich so I get alot of stuff as you can imagine (don't even get me started on my car). Still doesn't take away how annoying and obnoxious he is, he's a demon from hell, my moms to naive to notice it. Anyways with that being said things are very complex. Then one afternoon with my friend Allison I hear a gunshot and a yell. Next thing I know I'm rushing some 6 foot guy, who got shot in the rib cage, to the hospital. I was relieved when he was okay I guess but suddenly he asks to stay at my house. I eventually say okay, which leads to hiding him in my room and stuffing him under the bed when my parents come in. (when they actually pay attention to my life) thing about this guy, who's name is Jason, is he's not normal. He can run as fast as a car, he leaps out my window (which is a two story house) causually, he has claws that occasionally come out, and his eyes glow between his long black hair. Turns out he's a supernatural beast being chased by a group called "the phantoms". I'm keeping him a freeloader but how long can I keep the secret? And when I can't stay away from what lies in his green pulsing eyes I get involved with more than I expected. But when his isolation becomes passion for me, he sacrifices all his thoughts and business, and focuses on me. With us falling in love, he protects me while I keep him undercover. But what happens if someone finds out? And how long can I hold down this secret? A story filled with suspense, passion, and complications......Rescued. Hehe tell me what you think <3
Yeahhh I did not finish this...idk why lol but uhh..I might do it later..I have something planned. Like I said..it's book, think I can post a whole book online? Plus people copy things...-_-
So I'm not gonna finish this one online (however it will definetley be a book) yet I have a few other stories I'm going to drown this fan fiction in (starting with chase) lol with a story about me and jason in real life (well a fantasy but I mean it'll be realistic so nothing supernatural) and a guy named Tyler and also Allison and Alexander they will be in that order okay? Okay thx readers