Red Song

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by F_FoR_FiRe, Nov 23, 2011.

  1. Red Song is the book that I'll be writing right here ,

    Yes right HERE

    Hope Y'all will enjoy the Prelude




    Dark summer night, cold , breeze and nothing in sight. Nothing in place , nothing on the Loft street. Lights are off, Two brothers in red walk down a dark alley . Hoping to find the Red song .

    The Red song was a dark song , written by the most famous composer the most darkest composer , the greediest composer, and even if you were that dark , that greedy that famous you wouldn't seek for that song. But the brothers in red weren't worried about that , they weren't worried about the consequences they weren't worried at all.

    Brothers in Red were raised back in 1903 , born in midst of fighting , growing up with violence didn't bother them . They had all the needed to find the red song and end this Cursed placed upon them.



    Or
     
  2. Thx PWND , I'm trying mix a little action with suspense and mystery , while have some humor in there
     
  3. I'll update later tonight
     
  4. Sebastian is the narrator .



    The two brothers in red ,were Henry
     
  5. I can't believe it cut off all mine writing.  Brb let me write it agin
     
  6. The two brother in red ,Henry and Sebastian were heading for Loft. As Henry walked with a black cases the shape of an instrument in his hand , I walked with a black case on mine back.

    We finally arrived at loft street , the street said to have the red song , the street that has the prestigious academy .Phantom Academy , was the academy we were going to attend and had to attend . As we walked down the street Henry came to a stop and placed the black case in his hand down and opened it .

    Henry took out the instrument in the case , the viola , instrument of pain, torture, agony and all that hurts. "henry why do you have that out I Asked" . "because I wish to "
    Just as he said that his light blue eyes became dark red , his voice started to echo , then I knew the song has taken over .