Red Luscious Lips

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 7, 2011.

  1. He held my chin and I looked away.

    "Dawn..."

    He turned my chin to face him.

    "Dawn..."

    He locked eyes with me, his hazel ones locking with my violet ones.

    "Dawn..."

    He kept repeating my name, caressing my cheek while he did so.

    "Darin I-"

    He silenced me with a kiss; it was full of his love, his desire, his lust. It also had passion, fiery, and force.

    My passion, my love. His fiery, his force.

    I pulled away, not wanting this to happen.

    "No..."

    He pulled me closer, until our faces were only centimeters apart.

    "Yes."

    He kissed me again, declaring that he wouldn't stop until I answered him.

    My eyes were full of tears. I never knew this day would happen; I was in love with a wolf.

    He wrapped his arms around my waist, and I put mine around his neck.

    He suddenly pulled away.

    I sat there, looking confused and innocent.

    "Dawn-"


    He looked at me again and his eyes weren't hazel, they were a bloody red that showed a raging inferno in them.

    "Darin!"

    He pinned me to a wall and attacked my lips hungrily. My eyes were filled with tears, but he didn't notice. We kissed for a couple of minutes until we needed to catch our breath.

    "You have red, luscious lips..."

    He disappeared and reappeared behind me, covering my eyes with his hand, holding my waist with the other.

    He spinned me around and kissed me again, stroking my hair and growled in my ear. I kept
     
  2. whimpering and pulled away. I got my bags and left.


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    Same thing with my fucking phone. Keeps auto post. :mad:. Continued story^^
     
  3. Carry on Plz I'm enjoying this
     
  4. Ooh, I like this one a lot!! 
     
  5. Its so good
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  6. Can I b in it?
     
  7. Dark long brown/black hair , very dark brown eyes, naturally tanned skin, 5'8 in height, slim but strong body- I do lots of exercise n gym n stuff :)
    Clothes - short denim shorts a cute t-shirt with writing on it
     
  8. Any mire sign ups? I
     
  9. Name: Nikki
    Height: 5'4
    Looks: shorts, tank top with a cami, and flip flops, brown eyes and hair
    Personality: likes to have fun, kind- hearted, honest, friendly, can get pissed
    Age: Whatever you need
    Part: anything
     
  10. Now I sit here in my room, rethinking about last night. We were at his treehouse, basically his house. His eyes were red, indicating that he would be deadly and couldn't control himself. I kept thinking aboutDarin until somebody jumped in from the windows.


    "AHHHHH!!!!!"


    The mysterious figure put a hand around my mouth.

    "Shh!!! Its me, Daniel!"

    "Daniel, WTH!!!"

    "Sorry! Darin asked me to send you this, no idea what it is but, meh. Clan leaders are very suspicious."

    I smiled and gave him a peck on the lips as a goodbye. He blushed a vivid red and I laughed and playfully slapped his shoulder.


    "You do know I have a crush on you. Right? Are you torturing me with those red luscious lips of yours?"

    He winked and jumped out the window.

    He had a crush on me?! Wow. Then I thought again, why did he say that I had red- DARIN!

    "Did you say my name?"

    I looked around to see him next to my bed, smiling.

    "Darin! Wait, no smoking."

    He was smoking a cigarette and my mom might find out.

    "Chillax! Just a cig."

    "Darin."

    "FINE."

    He threw it out the window and I just giggled.

    "What's so funny?"

    "Look at your hair!!"


    His hair was usually short and curly, and it was brown. But this time, it looked like a grizzly bear sat on it!

    I kept laughing that I fell on the floor, still laughing.

    "OMG!!! So hard to breathe!!!"

    I kept laughing. Seriously, if you were there, you'd be laughing too.

    He grabbed a mirror and took a closer look. He DID look like a grizzly bear.

    He just grinned and pinned me on the floor, his grin very wide. I just giggled and gave him a peck on the cheek.

    "Darin, will you get off?"

    "Nope."

    Then he kept nuzzling my hair and made grizzly bear noises. I kept laughing until my mom walked in. I saw Darin hiding in the shadows.


    "Dawn, is everything alright? I heard grizzly bear noises and some laughter. Did a grizzly bear attack and tickle you?"

    I tried not to laugh. Tickle?!

    "No mom, a werewolf attacked me and tickled me. He was just half grizzly bear and made those noises."

    It was half true! Although he wasn't half grizzly.

    "Ah.. Okay sweetie. Get some rest."

    "Sure mom!"

    Mum closed the door and I stood there, giggling.

    Then Darin came out of the shadows and pinned me on the bed.


    "Yo. Half grizzly bear? Nuh uh. Look at me, I'm 100% boyfriend material!"

    He ripped off his shirt and showed of his tan muscles.

    I laughed and slapped his arm away.

    "Yeah. Half grizzly bear ya big show off!"

    I threw my pillow at him. We had a pillow fight for a few minutes until I got sleepy and tired and fell on the bed.

    "Yawn... You better go Darin. I'm sleepy..."


    "Nah, I'm staying."

    "Darin!! My mom!!"

    "Dawn!! I don't care!!"

    He jumped on the bed and gave me those puppy eyes of his.

    "They're not gonna work THIS time!"

    Last time, he used it to give him my beef steak that was MY lunch.


    "Hey babe, I'm not begging for food here."

    "Darin!! I don't care!!"

    He growled at me and I gave him a death glare.

    "Seriously? Threatening your girlfriend just to sleep over at her place?"

    "Yeah. What you gonna do about it?"

    "THIS!"

    I threw a pillow at him and I laughed.

    "Fine. Not my fault if we're late when we go to school or when we get busted by my mom."

    I fell asleep soon after that.

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    My best friend helped me write this chapter.
     
  11. I love this:) it's amazing!!
     
  12. Thank chu. I'm anticipating to read ur story too.
     
  13. Great job!!
     
  14. Yup very good  waiting what happen next
     
  15. I love it!








    Darin, baby, Id let you stay over at my house ANY night 

    Lol, Rofl, Lmao, Lmfao, Roflmfao!!
     
  16. Darin's POV
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    Dawn fell asleep and I looked at her. She was so peaceful...

    I looked out the window.

    "Daniel."

    Daniel appeared. There were 3 rival wolf clans and we were rank one. Daniel here is the co-leader. I'm the leader.

    "Yes Darin?"

    "Tell me more about mortal infatuation."

    He looked at me suspiciously then at Dawn.

    "Darin. Seriously?"

    "Just shut up and tell me."

    "Fine."

    He told me about infatuation all sorts of ways to deal with them. He told me what kind of ways to show them too.

    "You know, you have to choose her sooner or later. The other clans might get her before you do."

    Then my mind snapped.

    --- flashback ---

    Dawn was walking home until she nearly got hit by a car.

    Then I strode in the scene. I appeared in front of her and stopped the car with just my hand.

    "Darin?"

    I was a new student here and I didn't talk to many people that day.

    I nodded at Dawn and looked at her closely. I knew it was her. She was the girl in the prophesies. It was said we should look for a girl whose hair was brown like caramel and eyes like violet (too much boring detail)

    "Do you need me to take you home?"

    "Uhh... Not really."

    I could tell she needed one. I picked her up bridal style and I ran to the address she told me.

    "Thank you Darin."

    Our faces were so near and we were ready to kiss until she pulled away. But I wasnt about to let a precious moment slip. I kissed her and left.
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    Part 1 of chapter 3
     
  17. I snapped back to reality.


    "Darin, seriously. Lucky the girl loves you. You should start loving her."

    "Isn't kissing a way of loving?"

    Daniel shook his head.

    "You have to feel it. Yes, you're the guy everybody at school would kill for your looks and abs. You're the guy every girl would want to have as a boyfriend to make others jealous. Dawn just loves you. Show her love. Not just kisses, LOVE!"

    He shook me and I glared at him.

    "You love her, don't you."

    He stared at me and let go

    "Who told you."

    "I don't need others to tell me, the way you talk about her, your eyes light up and you have total interest everytime you listen to her talk."

    "Darin, please. Love the girl. She doesn't deserve to be used!"

    "I want to. But somehow, I can't feel what you're trying to describe to me. One question, how do you know so much?"

    "Sigh... I fell in love with a fox demon once..."

    "Jesus Daniel!"

    "She tricked me and left, stealing my heart."

    "That might be the answer I don't feel love."

    "that's because you're a heartless monster."

    He left me there, curious and anxious.

    What is love? I kept thinking about it, looking out the window and into the full moon.
     
  18. So goooooooood
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