Don't ask about the title the explanation is in the first couple of chapters (I hope) and I'll now start making this sucker ~~~~~~~~~~~~<<>> <-- (signature wand) Chapter 1 "JASON!" That was the last thing I heard before the crash. I was flung out the window and into the grass. I hope Matt is ok, he has a girlfriend who loves him to the depths of the universe unlike me who is single and dying. The other driver called 911 I heard the sirens in the distance. Couple minutes earlier...... "JASON!!!!!" I screamed as a pick up truck slammed into the car. I somehow wasn't badly injured so I called 911, then I called my girlfriend "Yes Matt?" She said wondering why I was calling. "Susan...... Susan me and Matt are on Jane St. and we were in a car crash and I think Jason is..." My voice gets shaky as I say the ending of the sentence " I think Jason is during Susan." Susan hangs up because she's calling both of our parents. I sit they're gasping for breath as blood flows at of me quickly, I feel like crying but my eyes are dried out. Then a light starts covering my eyes I start screaming "I can't die not yet! Not yet!!!!" Then I'm gone. Couple months later..... I'm still sad about what happened to Jason he was my best friend since Preschool and I never told him that Susan was pregnant with a girl. I was going to name it After him but girls version, I was sitting in the same hospital they brought Jason to see if they could "revive" him but for a different reason....... A nurse comes up to me and says "Matt would you like to meet your daughter?" I get up and walk along with her to Susan's room when I walk in I see her holding our child closely and she's smiling but you can see she's tired and wants to go to bed. I walk up to Susan and our daughter and say "Can I name her?" She says yes because she already knows the name I'm picking. "Does Jessica work?" I ask knowing she'll say yes. The nurse leaves awhile later and I put my hand in my pocket Susan looks at me wondering what I'm doing I kneel down and pop out the ring and the question "Susan will you marry me?" She gasps then says " Yes Matt I will marry you" she smiles then we kiss, this was the first time we kissed and it was like I was eating the best taco in the world. 5 years later "Jessica Get over here!" Matt says. I start running over to him happily because I know he's going to pick me up and hug me a little to tight then I'll laugh he'll laugh kinda goofy to make me laugh harder, my dad told me about his best friend once such a sad story but somehow I could vision it i didn't want to I just say from Jason's eyes, I wanted to run over and hug daddy tightly and cry I did run over and hug but not tight and no crying.
But you need to fix some stuff up, like the spelling write it on notes and read it a few times before you post it here
Its good but I would like some build up more sensrey stuff maybe when the propose what they look like where were they during the crash just stuff to paint me a picture
Chapter 2 ~~~~~~~~~~~~<<>> That was the First "hint" you'll learn about that later though I hope. I hope indeed. 12 years later....... "Jess! Your gonna be late for school!" I heard dad say. I rolled my eyes and said " I'm coming jeez dad" I run down the stairs and grab my purse, all my things were in my locker and after school I was going to the mall so why not bring it? I start walking out the door and then I see my boyfriend Shaun pass by, I run down the steps smiling, then I kiss his cheek and he walk together to school. Not holding hands or some romantic stuff like that just side by side. I then start to think "we I can't believe I'm dating this guy when I'm a-" that's when I stop the thought I think to myself I love him so much I'd take a bullet to the brains for him I'd suck out poison out of him, I'd do anything for him. They say passes fast and when I get home I look in the mirror and think "I wish this was me" then I think this Is me why would I think that? I shrug it off before I go to my room to play Star Trek online (DON'T TELL) right now I have three accounts all female and some reason have huge breasts (the men love 'em) I play on my lowest that is a level 30-33 all federation, I hate Klingon (do your research non-Star Trek fans) and also Skyrim (search it up also ladies and gents) my mom yells at me for supper then I tell back "I'm Comin I'm Comin!" I hope it's Taco's! I've always liked taco's for some reason I never knew why I just love 'em I smile when I smell the taco's then I go into a fast walk to the kitchen where my younger brothers are eating already I mumble to myself in disgust because they're eating hot dogs and spaghetti because we all like different things it is really annoying you know! I can't wait till I move out and can eat the same thing as my roommate (I hope) I have to deal with now though so I just eat the taco's and go back and start reading a book I've been reading. Ok so it's the Bible, I'm still on Genesis after the Daughters if lot Have ummm how do u say this that's not weird? They made him drunk and hade "intercourse" with him and named the sons obvious names of what they did with him. When I have a Son I'm naming him Jason and that's FINIL! I then think " Jason Jones Ramirez Jr. good name" then I think to myself my Last name is Kelley.... And there's no Jason's I know of except uncle Jason who died before I was born I shrug at the strange thought. Only if I knew what I'd learn. <<>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hope you like it sorry of it's short and spelling mistakes and I didn't explain enough thanks for reading!
Should I do pov and here's a picture off Jess..... I run to my room and start looking in a small end table throwing trash over my shoulder muttering nope over and over until I find it "ah ha! Here it is" I say and walk back over to you (whoever it may be) I hand you the pic and say "no I'm not a stalker this is anime not real" I grin and walk away as you look at me dumbstruck and thinking "what a nerd that guy is" then I put in my earbuds and start nodding to the music.
Chapter 3 ~~~~~~~~~~<<>> I feel asleep. I was in a place with a stream... And a old man was there looking at me. "Jess bath in the river." He said So I did then he said "don't put your head under." I didn't then I woke up by...... Force? And started crying. I hear my daughter crying so I'm worried, she never cries. I start walking to her room in worry and open the door and say "are you okay Jess?" And then... I hear my dad come in and he says "you okay Jess?" Then I think my mind had a little shit down or something but i jumped up and kissed him on the lips and stayed there on his arms kissing him passionately my mother was at work so she didn't see this then my dad pulled away and said "jas-.... Jess? Why did you do that?" I respond "I... I don't know... Dad I'm sorry....." I look at him in a whole different way.... Then I start crying again so I hug him tightly not letting go. He looks down at me and says " it's okay sweetie it's okay" I start feeling better. <<>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry if it's short update I only can get this part thought up
Due to umm reasons The author had given me this story to write. It will look exactly the same mound a little different bit I just wanted ff ppl to know