Reality Check

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Allison_DiLaurentis (01), Jul 19, 2011.

  1. Okay so my first story pretty much was just plain bad. So that one is d e a d DEAD so here is my new story. Hope u like it!!

    "Maeghan! Maeghan! Maeghan! Are you up there? Maeghan!" I tip toed to the balcony opened the door and walked outside. "Ryan what the hell are you doing it's two thirty in the morning!?" I couldn't see him but I'm pretty sure he was smiling. "I wanted to see you. I missed you.. Will you come down here so I don't have to come up there and get you." I turned around walked into my room shut the door and tip toed down the stairs to the backyard. I ran to Ryan. He picked me up and spun me around in a giant hug. He put me down and kissed me on the lips. I gladly kissed back and smiled between kisses. I was in my happy place.

    "Let's go somewhere. Right now." I looked at him funny. "I can't. I will get in trouble. And besides. Where will we go?"

    Ryan paused before speaking again. "the lake." " the lake. Are you crazy. That's almost an hour away. We can't go to the lake. And besides. We have school tomorrow and my parents would Kill me if I left."

    He grabbed me and pulled me closer. Ryan kissed me and whispered. "they will never know."
     
  2. Ooh. Can I be ur bff?
     
  3. or like twin sister or something?
     
  4. Yeah I will give you an important role. Do you still want the same character
     
  5. yeshhh......and if im ur twin then our parents are rich...
     
  6. Haha okay you can be my twin. Do you have a bf or no are you athletic or not
     
  7. yes and yes but not too athletic but im the head cheerleader
     
  8. Okay what is your personality
     
  9. I finally gave in and went with Ryan to the lake. I am going to get killed. We sat silently in the car for about ten minutes before Ryan said something.

    "Maeghan?"
    "yeah"
    "what would you say if I told you I wanted to go into the army "
    There was a long pause in between.
    "god Ry. Are you serious? The army!? What about baseball."
    His eyes made a quick glance around the car and grabbed my hand.
    "Mae, what if that dont work out how I want it to. What will I do then. It's not a deffinate thing but it's an option."
    I took a long deep breath and closed my eyes. I took a minute to think about what to say. Opened my eyes and said this
    " Ryan I will support you 100% in whatever you do. I may not like it but I can't stop you. Just please please don't die." I said not to confidently.

    Ryan looked at me and squeezed my hand. "I love you Maeghan."
    "I know. I love you to." I replied.

    Ten minutes later we pulled through the line of trees and up near the lake. He opened my door and I got out. He pulled me close to him. I reached up and kissed his soft sweet lips. I nestled my he'd in his chest and hugged him. I never wanted to let go
     
  10. I finally gave in and went with Ryan to the lake. I am going to get killed. We sat silently in the car for about ten minutes before Ryan said something.

    "Maeghan?"
    "yeah"
    "what would you say if I told you I wanted to go into the army "
    There was a long pause in between.
    "god Ry. Are you serious? The army!? What about baseball."
    His eyes made a quick glance around the car and grabbed my hand.
    "Mae, what if that dont work out how I want it to. What will I do then. It's not a deffinate thing but it's an option."
    I took a long deep breath and closed my eyes. I took a minute to think about what to say. Opened my eyes and said this
    " Ryan I will support you 100% in whatever you do. I may not like it but I can't stop you. Just please please don't die." I said not to confidently.

    Ryan looked at me and squeezed my hand. "I love you Maeghan."
    "I know. I love you to." I replied.

    Ten minutes later we pulled through the line of trees and up near the lake. He opened my door and I got out. He pulled me close to him. I reached up and kissed his soft sweet lips. I nestled my he'd in his chest and hugged him. I never wanted to let go
     
  11. I like it:) Ryan is a sweetie!!
     

  12. your twin sis approves
     
  13. The next morning I woke up ten minutes before my alarm clock. I decided that since there was no way for me to fall asleep again and make it count. That I got up and went to the bathroom. I looked horrible. Because I stayed up till 4:30 with Ryan at the lake I had dark circles under my eyes and I could barely keep my eyes open. Ugh. Makeup time.

    Buzzzzz. Buzzzzz. Buzzzzz. I ran to my phone and opened the text message waiting for me. Guess who It was from. Ryan. It said: hey mae I will pick you up in an hour. Love you.

    Yay. At least I dont have to worry about driving today. I looked at the clock 6:03. crap.

    I ran to the bathroom so I could get a shower before kaelynn woke up. God that girl could sleep forever. Wich made sense. She stayed up all night texting her boyfriend. Where as I got to see mine at two thirty am.

    I realized I was freezing and still turned the shower on hot. I got in and let the hot steamy water run all over my body.

    I got out and wrapped myself in a towel and walked to my room.



    Kaelynn was my twin sister. Head cheerleader (we both where) she looked a little like me with her light brown hair. Hers was long and had gorgeous beach waves. (mine was curly when I didn't straighten it) Her stunning, pretty, dark green eyes (mine where blue) had a hypnotizing effect and she had olive toned tan skin that looked beautiful with her face and personality (same color as mine) we both have a bit of a country accent being from down in South Carolina. We where what some refer to as the rich kids of Montgomery high. We didn't mind it.

    Hm. What to wear. I will just borrow something from kaelynn.

    I walked into her room and threw a pillow at her " wake up already. Your going to be late!"

    "Crap. What the hell time is it!!?"
    "6:30" I told her. She cursed under her breath. "Can I borrow some clothes."
    "no we have to wear our cheer uniforms today. Football game tonight against Lamar. Remember dummy?"
    "crap. Alright. Is Who taking you to school?"
    "John."
    I rolled my eyes with a face that said it all. "don't you ever get tired of him. You are with him all the time. And when your not your texting him."
    "Whatever."

    Ten minutes later I was in my cheer uniform with my light brown shoulder length hair half up with my big white bow on top.

    I had my blue and gold uniform on with its crop top shel and mini skirt. I had my cheer bag with extra clothes (dark wash skinny jeans and a ruffly pinkish tank top with my black leather crop half sleeve jacket and black ankle boots) I had my pom poms and some extra makeup.

    I ran down the stairs and grabbed my lunch from the fridge and put it in my backpack grabbing a breakfast bar on the way out.

    Alec stopped me in front of the door "Maeghan are you going to school?"
    He asked his cute little six year old eyes sparkling as he spoke
    "yeah I gota go. Sorry I have a football game to cheer at tonight. I will take you to the movie tomorrow. Okay?"
    "awwwhhhh!!! Maeghan! You promised!!"
    "I know. Sorry I promise. Tomorrow I will take you to see cars 2"
    "alright. Bye Maeghan."
    "bye. Love you!" I said as I ran out the door.

    Ryan was already there when I got to the driveway

    He smiled as I got in the car.



    Sorry this one is really long. Haha I just kept writing. Haha
     
  14. ...

    Yayyy....
    I get to sleep laaaaaaate. (;
     
  15. CHARACTER EXPLANATION no1:
    Maeghan: blue eyes. Shoulder length lightcbrown hair that she likes to straighten. Normaly it has pretty beachy waves. Head cheerleader with her sister but Maeghan dosnt like cheer as much as her twin sister kaelynn. Rich kid. Very popular. Nice girl neat freak plays soccer volleyball and cheers. 16 years old. Birthday is June 13. She loves the colors light blue and purple. She has a boyfriend named Ryan who is 17. They have been together for a year and a half. Sophomore Tan skin she is 16Any questions on Maeghan?

    Kaelynn: same look as Maeghan except she has green eyes long hair and dosnt straighten it often. Loves cheer. Plays volleyball has a boyfriend named John. Tan skin sophomore she is 16

    Makayla Anderson: Maeghan's best friend always wears short shorts red convers and rocker t's or t shorts. Mother hates and she is a love child. She loves to surf but hasn't been since before she left for south Carolina. Her boyfriend John-Mills is a senior in high school and plays varsity football he is the quarter back she is a sophomore she is 16

    Lauren: Maeghan and Kaelynn's younger sister she is 15 and she is a competitive gymnast. She has been doing gymnastics since she was 3 and loves it. She wants to be an olympic gymnast and loves her life. She is home schooled because of all her gymnastics practices. She is an elite and her best event is beam
     
  16. Question: Who is Alec?
     
  17. It is Maeghan and Kaelynn's younger brother. He is 6 and the youngest.
     
  18. Yep. Do u know anyone who wants to begin this story