this is a story About a girl named Daphne and along the story line she finds people who she thought was someone ended up being someone TOTALLY different. I'm writing this one by myself although thanks to all the people in free write. This first POV is dedicated to: TheAndi Jade777 TiffanyHwang7 Hope u like!
It was in my third year (10th grade) in high school when this "mess" happened. ~ "So Please Review Pages 130-200" Madame.Larenard said hastily to us. "QUI?" I screamed in the middle of class. oh sh*t. God damn French it gets on my nerves. But seriously SEVENTY PAGES REVIEWED IN ONE NIGHT! Who DOES that!? I grabbed my zebra stripped pencil along with my black eraser and shoved it in the side pocket of my Freakishly huge grey hobo bag. I was ready when the bell rang. MOTHER OF GOD! I half skipped out of my class. And into study Hall... Time to get some reviewing done. It was right next to my French class so I was always there. before everyone. Even the teacher. I could smell Chanel No.5 perfume. The teachers here... "why hello there Daphne!" My "supervisor" said cheerily to me. Basically supervising study hall is like a walk in the pArk for her. Unless ur allergic to bark or grass or bugs and u hate the outdoors... She basically sits there reading murder mysteries all for what seems like twelve hours. "hello Mrs. Platypus" I said calmly. It was the weirdest last name in the world except for this time there wa my vice-principle in grade Four. Ms.Exytime U can imagine. I watched the other students form around me. I sat in the back where I normally sit with my two girls Tiffany and Deirdre. Tiffany was two seconds behind me. She sat. I saw Cody who was on the basketball team but not the star sat next to me. I was about to tell him to GTFO when Deirdre came in saw Cody and walked right over. She raised one eyebrow slightly and said: "I sit here. Understood?" "Class this study hall has been extended for another half hour due to some "minor incident" with Bloom in the science room. So it's an open period u can stay here and study or go to the Math English or history room and work on your projects. I'm leaving and going to the English room so If u stay u must behave!" The whole class left except for Me Deirdre Tifanny Cody a girl called Stefanie and a couple Shania and Clinton. They started having sex in a corner of a room. I turned away. While telling them to get a room. Stefanie the ultimate stripper Took off her clothes and joined them.. "Got f*ck that is disguisting!" tiffany said. "AGREED!" I said. Deirdre threw up and Stefanie Swam in it. Cody push them out of the room. I finally thought we could all study when I saw Cody doing something to Deirdre!
One problem. I don't swear But I love it!! And thank you sooo much for including me in your story
Deirdre's POV I just opened my book when Cody stood up ad pushed me against the wall. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" I scream. He uses his mouth to cover my mouth from screaming. "Baby your so sexy I wanna TOOUUUCCHHH YOU!" I see Daphne look over. I sack Cody. He kisses me so hard and passionately then he reaches his Hand up onto my hip and starts to unzip my grey skinny jeans. "THE F*CK!" I scream even though the sound is muffled out. "yeaaaahhhh I can Feeeel yooou!" Cody presses his hands against my boob when I push him away. "Ah playing hard to get! I like it! Imma hump you and love you! This wont hurt a bit! Babe i love you and this will feel nice!" He still comes back then the fourth time I pushed him away he sorta froze and then fell on the floor. I was scared and scarred 4 life. I looked behind him and Daphne was standing there with her butterfly knife In her hand. "Deirdre are you okay?" tiffany asked even though she knew I wasn't. "I'm sorry!" Tiffany said with a hell of a lot of sympathy in her voice. "Yeah I couldn't help it." Daphne said quietly. "help doing what?" tiffany asked curiously. I pointed to Cody's dead body. "Oh my god! Daphne you are crazy! Your going to jail!" Tiffany screamed, scared. "I'm not crazy and I'm not going to jail. I was protecting Deirdre and besides people like that shouldn't have the chance to live. It disgusts me." Daphne told Us. "But how are we going to explain this?" I asked. "Well when Those people were doing things in the corner of the room, Deirdre threw up. So we can just say he was drunk and chocked on his own throw up." Daphne replied. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> "Okay," Tiffany said looking at the body, "who's gonna move it!" "Everyone." Daphne said. "I do not want to touch Cody after he touched me. I said feeling quite sad. "Understood." Tiffany said lightly touching my shoulder. I jumped. "Sorry Deir!" Tiffany said tAking a few steps back. "then Hijack some beer bottles we need the smell of alchohol! An hurry! Free period is almost over." Daphne told me, while texting someone. "Okay." I replied. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> I checked the back of the teacher lounge. No one was their. I quickly grabbed one bottle of Beer from Mr.Randai our Language Teacher. Every week we learn a bit about a new language it's pretty cool and we can only do that because Mr.Randai Can't stay focused. Beer problems.. Duh'. I grabbed the bottle when I heard. Madame.Lerenard and Mrs.Chang come in deep in a conversation. So this is how I die... I think to myself. With nowhere to hide I was busy thinking of excuses when someone grabbed my arm and pulled me behind the refridgerator. I screamed still in shock from Cody. "Shut up! Your gonna get us both expelled!" it was a girls voice and it sounded serious. I calmed down. "Okay but who are-" that was all I could say because the girl hushed me and told me to stay still and not make any sound. I did as told. I heard Mme.Lerenard and Mrs.Chang stop in their tracks. I froze. "Barbra did you hear that?" I heard Mrs.Chang say in her British accent. "Indeed I most certainly did." Mme.Lerenard said confused. "Oh it couldn't have been my hearing aids making noises again if we both heard it!" Mrs.Chang said. "It must've been Bloom!" Mme.Lerenard told Mrs.Chang. "yes then we should go and see!" Mrs. Chang said, and they walked away with their old fashioned brown loafers stomping on the floor.
Name:Melody(whatever last name you want) Agesame as Tiffany) Personality: (Bad character:Mean,cruel,likes to flirt with boys) (Good character:Kind,sweet,innocent,a little naive) Looks:Wavy shoulder-length black hair,grey eyes,dresses cutely
Tiffany's POV ew EWWW! I've never seen a dead body before let alone touch one! But it was for the best. I absolutely do not want Daphodile to go to jail. besides that effing Cody guy was such a..... I will probably go to hell if I say how I feel... I dragged Cody's body over to the throw up, waiting for Deirdre to come back with the alcoholic beverage. "Daph how could you be so chill?" I asked very curiously. "Tiffany," Daphne said. "I've done this before..." I was shocked. "what?" I asked. "I'm part of a killing group called White." she told me. "HOW THE HELL COULD YOU KEEP THAT A SECRET!?" I screMed at her. "Okay so one day I was walking randomly along the sidewalk to go home when I hear a person smash a car. No one was around so I called the cops. Tough luck stupid cops didn't believe me cuz I was Grade.8 at the time. I looked again to see anyone around and yep there were three other girls Abigail, Erica and Melody. We all had the same idea. I grabbed my stiletto and threw it and the guy. He was shocked and turned around Melody stood there and sacked him. Abigail found a huge piece of wood and smashed it on his face. Erica smacked his face and I found a really big rock. Melody and Katie rushed over to help me and Abigail stood there as a distraction. Then he said we must stop this funny business or he will shoot Abigail. He saw we had the rock. Abigail wTched as he pulled the trigger. She flattened herself on the ground and the shot missed. Meanwhile while Erica Melody and I were still standing behind him we all threw the rock and It felt good to have killed a criminal. We kill people who are like that and anyone in our way." daphne said letting out a deep and a . I was shocked "AND YOU DIDN'T TELL ME?" I screamed in her face. "oath" Daphne told me very serious. "but what really inspired us to become a group was The newspaper. It had a headline about the group KARMA. We became a group like them, but we do things differently. We don't go out of our way to kill people. We cover up our tracks." Daphne said. Right as Deirdre entered the room with.... Melody? <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> Deirdre's POV So the girl who pulled me behind the fridge in the teachers lounge/staff room introduced herself. Her name was Melody and she was part of a killing group called white with apparently Daphne! "Deirdre! Why are you with Melody?" tiffany asked with a worried expression on her face. "Relax Tiffany. Obviously Daph Told you about us. Don't worry I'm not killing Deirdre." Melody said as she laughed. "Yeah thanks Meli!" Daphne said as she high-fived her. Meli? I thought we were her best friends. Maybe Erica Melody and Abigail are closer to her than I thought! I looked over at Tiffany and I could tell she was thinking the exact same thing. "So I texted Mel to say that you needed back-up." Daphne told me. "Ahh makes sense." I replied. "Got the beer?" Tiffany asked. "Right." Melody said. She opened the bottle and poured it into the throw up that now attracted flies. "Melody you should go." Daphne told her. "Yeah you weren't in Study Hall." I said. "Obviously." Tiffany said lightly pushing me. "Yeah Mr.Kelly is probably wondering where I am. She handed me the bottle. And left. "um were do I put this?" I looked at Daphne. "Give it." she leaned forward and grAbbed it. She simply threw it out the window all the way across the street right in the garbage can. "WOW!" I could feel my jaw drop to the ground. "That was incredible aim!" Tiffany told her. "Practice," she said as if it was so simple. "Listen since you know Bout "White" wAnna join? We will need back-up. But absolutely no telling anyone not your parent not your friends not your neighbor not your cousin that lives on the other side of the world not some random stranger that you met on your last vacation to New Zealand. NO ONE!" Daphne told us. My mind raced. Part of it was happy to be included another part of it was excited to be in on the action another was panicking what if someone found out or asked where I was when I was on a killing spree? Part of it was also scared. Stupid mixed emotions!
F*ck I said Katie instead of Erica cuz that's what I was gonna name the character but then I changed it. I have better plans for Katie >
I HEREBY ANNOUNCE I SHALL UPDATE EVERYDAY! ATLEAST UNLESS I HAVE AN EXCUSE AND IF I DON'T YOU CAN KILL ME! Btw you can Spam and troll and clog up my thread I don't mind only if your actually reading (kind of) just try not to clog it to much.
Krystine Raven Age: any Looks: A bit scary when she wants to, she has dark black hair and very dark brown eyes. Apart from that, you still decide Personality: She can be a real b**** when she wants to be, but usually isn't. She has a slightly hard time making friends, but any friend she does make earns her trust and her loyalty... You decide everything else. If I'm in, thanks!
Melody's P.O.V I can't believe That Deirdre and Tiffany want to do this! "Okay so right this way!" Daphne led them to our Trailer van. "Wow!" Deirdre said as she walked in. Abigail was eating pizza when she saw Deirdre and Tiffany. She stood up. "What are THEY doing here?" she asked. "Relax They killed Cody. There joining us." I explained. "That's good we need back up." she said more calm as she sat down. "So newcomers eh?" Erica slowly said. "Come on Erica.. She's joking." I told them. Deirdre looked at her skeptically. "Yeah I am! haha!" she said in her very high voice. It was natural no one would expect her to be a killer. Shes the Smart one in the group on the honors roll and everything. I watched her twirl her blue and yellow dress. I heard a knock on the door. Tiffany and Deirdre looked at each other confused. "I thought that the only people in the white were you Erica Abigail Daphne and us!" Tiffany said. "we are." Abigail said. She grabbed her knife and twirled it in her hand. I was worried. "oh no Daphne!" I said quietly. It's Krystyn!" I said. Erica fainted. "Well we will go and hide." Deirdre said grabbing Tiffany's arm. "Good idea." Daphne said. "I'll help you hide. We can't let anyone know that you guys are part of the white too. It must remain as a four people group. In everyone's mind." I poured water on Erica's face. She always faints unless on a mission. "Melody you drag Erica to the front of the truck. Put the window covering on." Abigail told me. I nodded. "What no I'm awake! But I feel lightheaded!" Erica said. "What does Krystyn want?" Deirdre asked quite scared. "She knows about the white she doesn't know it's us though we always cover our faces with our white ski masks. She does research about us and almost found it was us!" I explained. "Yeah. We watched her for awhile but she just wants to kill everyone!" Abigail added. I heard her knock harder. "Get in the washroom!" Daphne hissed at Deirdre and Tiffany. "Okay Daphne open the door!" Erica whispered as she put on her mask. Abigail and I pit on our mask. Daphne already had hers on. She opened the door. "Hello White You know who I am and your about to die." Krystyn said. "By yourself I hardly doubt that." I said. "oh yeah?" She punched Erica in the face. "Don't touch her!" Abigail said very calm but serious. "Oh So thTs a her?" Krystyn said. "You knew that already. We know you've been stalking us." Daphne hissed. I looked at Erica. She got up off the ground and pushed Krystyn out of the trailer. We were outside now. "TrAp!" Erica said. And my god she was right. Jayden her twin sister wa standing there with a sniper-riffle. There BFF Susan was standing there on the roof with a crow bar and three other girls were just there for back-up. Aha Ktystyn let the fight begin.