READ PLZ (POEM/LYRICS)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by journey2dream, Oct 24, 2012.

  1. I'm a broken mirror
    On the floor there is broken glass
    The mirror used to reflect my love
    Now it only reflects my shatted past
    You made me believe
    all that wasn't true
    but now I know it wasn't me
    it was always you

    Thanks for reading tell me what u think plzz
    -jmarie
     
    #1 journey2dream, Oct 24, 2012
  2. This is quite good  just need to work on your rhyming more haha
     
    #2 riri_, Oct 25, 2012
  3. Thank you it means alot
     
    #3 journey2dream, Oct 25, 2012
  4. I like it but yeah stronger rhyming would help improve
     
    #4 Southern_Angel, Oct 26, 2012
  5. Really cool.
     
    #5 _Tron, Oct 26, 2012
  6. Make sure you keep a strong rythm then itll sound strong
     
    #6 Kanehex, Oct 26, 2012
  7. Great job though
     
    #7 Kanehex, Oct 26, 2012
  8. Thank you so much
     
    #8 journey2dream, Oct 26, 2012
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