I grew up as a little girl in a castle near the ocean where I could here waves everyday. My sister Snow White and I were very close. Daddy always said mommy died from a curse. When we were children snow white and I would play a game to guess what mommy looked like. She always was fathers favorite. I hear the door to my sisters room open in a loud creak. She's never up this early. I open my door as silently as I can but before I can go anywhere father calls,"Raven! Come here for a moment" I walk down the royal staircase. As usual father is sitting in his throne. Ever since we were 7 he has stayed in that chair and won't move. "father? I must ask, where is snow white going? You said it is forbidden for us to be out at this time. Did you not?" I ask staring at father. "Now Raven, Snow has gone on a little errand for me. Since you know I can't get up and move around these days......" im furious now. I cut him off,"You are very capable of moving!!!! But ever since mother died she's all you can talk about! It's either Mother or snow but never me! Don't I get any credit!?!?" I ask screaming. Father sighs and looks down. "Dismissed" he says with a wave of the hand. I push the doors open as hard as I can and walk out the palace doors. I get in my carriage and ride to find And Capture Snow. She won't get away with this. This is my second story PLZ be honest and tell what you think.
Ok here's the next part: UPDATE (well, what are you waiting for? read it!) I find snow at palisade falls. My carriage comes to a stop and I walk silently over to snow. "now,dear sister, what on earth do you think your doing?" I ask. "just thinking. Raven, why do you think we are so different? When we were children, we always stuck together and stood up for each other. Now, you want nothing to do with me." she says turning to look at me. I put a hand on her shoulder "now snow, you know that's not true. Your my favorite sister ever!" I say crossing my fingers behind my back. "I'm your only sister" she replies. "you know, I have always been jealous if you." I say to her. "really?" she asks surprised. "yes, see, father would kill himself if anything happened to you. Unlike me, he wouldn't care if i fell into a lava pit." I say. "that's not true. Father would not care if anything happened to me." she answered. I grin. "well, shall we test that?" I push snow and she goes tumbling over the edge. She splats to the rocks below. I pick up the bottle with the note inside that she was carrying. I ride back to the palace. "Raven, where is Snow white?" Father asks. I ignore his question and hand him the bottle. I turn away from him and start up the stairs. "RAVEN!" he yells. I half turn, smirking, and say,"Snow has been taken care of" then I turn back and continue up the stairs to my room.