Verse 1: Got my fingers on the keys, WASD And I'll punch u out even harder than when I punch trees I'll be racking up the stars like 123 When I snipe you from the top of the FTB Other rappers can keep all their money guns and weed But they should prepare to rage if they're up against me If you're fighting this gamer, then u got no hope Hit u straight in the dome, that's called a noscope 16 cores, that's how I'm processing Imma teach u a lesson in fps or hardcore questing I'm not hacking, I'm just good, noob quit ur ranting Got daedric bars, dragonbourne enchanted Again, I'm not a hacker, calm down boy, quit your hating I keep on fighting till the outpost is liberated Got the best gaming, got the best rhyming Now watch me spit faster than a p90 I'm the best gamer, all u guys are lamer, climbing up higher like an elevator If ur against me, then ur in danger and if ur on my team then I'll be your saviour Coming in so fast, I'm leaving craters, by the way everyone do me a favor Don't be a hater, I'm not a time waster, eat u like a gator, bitch I'll see u later Hook: I refuse to lose, better give me respect, I break necks Now who knows where I'm gonna be striking next But that's a different story, what's the issue right now I escape, wreck the place, then erase, and they're asking how, break it down Verse 2: Get a hundred fps in every fps I'm playing Rapping or gaming yeah u k that I'll be slaying Yeah that's right, I don't play nice I'ma get into the game, kill u once, then twice Then three times, cuz I got the sweet rhymes Never giving up until victories mine I'd keep going for hours, but it never takes long I'ma kick all your asses by the end of this song Nobody can best me, not even a test, see I'ma light u up, pull a clutch when I press E Yeah, I use that ultimate attack But it's a little different got no cooldown on my raps I'll fight u in a game, and I'll fight u on a beat The most MLG sniper, u could say I'm elite I keep fighting hard until I claim victory And Imma beat ur ass up, that's a guarantee Everybody's always saying that we got no life That's why my gaming vids get no views and no likes Can't u see were just trying to have some fun Yeah u might be a hero but I'm a badass one Hook: I refuse to lose, better give me respect, I break necks Now who knows where I'm gonna be striking next But that's a different story, what's the issue right now I escape, wreck the place, then erase, and they're asking how, break it down
No offense, but I don’t like it. The topic is... interesting (not a good type). At least it rhymes though! One thing that helps me write lyrics is writing them to a beat as well as keeping the amount of syllables the same in each line, but once you’re able to write the appropriate amount of syllables/words next line then it should flow smoothly. Keep it up if that’s what you like doing though! Songwriting is a process.
It rhymes well and you use a lot of great analogies and metaphors, but the topic itself is blandly overdone "tuff guy" boasting. Be more creative in your topic and I think you'll be a great songwriter. 5/10.
YALL ARE HATERS LMAOOO THIS SHIH FIRE AF I laughed the whole time. Don’t listen to these people, just post verse three. But also this is the goofy me talking so take it how you want too ?