Random RP 1

As some of you may know, I really like RP.
My guide was cool, and the examples in it were alright, but for the purposes of succinctness I only included 2.

There are more.
Here are 2.
There are plenty of grammatical issues, so bully me.



Doors are potentially very damaging weapons. Remember to always dominate the foot zone, and try to push/heave in an unpredictable pattern to keep them on the defensive.

16? Pimd is 17+, get a heck off.
Scorching hot pizza grease. Yum.



I like this one the most because the door is closed the entire time and they don't know what I look like, and they're doing like this whole dance that my character is obviously unaware of.
Just imagining someone actually doing that makes me so happy. It honestly makes this whole rp a quality meme.

This next one isn't as funny, and is potentially offensive, but I'm fairly certain it is less offensive than how they wanted it to go.


Uhuh. 2, you say?

*Judgement Intensifies*

Take note of the cane, which he doesn't notice.
And again, "Years" another context seed, amateurishly planted

Uncomfortable with sharing a seat, I stand up. Funny how he doesn't notice I'm like 70 years old ? Hiding the more obvious tells can help with things.
"My advice" is "You mustn't do that".
I know that anyone in the position of this character would react very differently, or would completely avoid being in it, even if half a life-time's passed since.
Though the swiftness of this particular encounter and the vagueness of the advice could be attributed to a change of mind due to severe discomfort, triggered, perhaps by his sitting down.


(This is the end of the RP. I'm gonna ramble to myself from here on out cause I'm killing time. Don't waste time reading it unless you're extremely bored)

I do prefer not using expositions, but sometimes when dominating a narrative in RP, you need to hide certain features from your partner to drive the plot in your context without them knowing it. I didn't really make the time-travelling thing clear until right at the end. I feel like reading the rp without the summary at the end would just be confusing. That's my fault. Perhaps simply stating that I was wrinkly and had gray hair wouldn't be wrong. It would have elicited a shocked response, but I kepts the clues sublte, he didn't pick up on them, and then, when I revealed the "plot twist", he was more confused than amazed or anything. A good plot twist needs to actually be somewhat obvious. Like when you're trying to remember a word, ans you have it on the cusp of your mind, you can taste it, but can't actually picture it clearly. Then the revelation has the highest impact.
I didn't do that at all. I think it would be hard to, because the Sherlocks in the audience may figure it out if you're trying to tempt them with too much bait and too many clues.
I wonder if a fortune-teller-esque, confirmation-bias-based approach would work. You actually make your clues point to 3 people. But you also plant some very subltle ones which could vaguely, generally tie to each of the 3 individually. And then when you reveal which one it is, it makes sense, because they then remember the very vague clue of the true case, but forget the others and then classify them as coincidence or "looking too hard". Idek what I'm saying at this stage. You saw my rp thing.

I already regret posting this.
I will post more later. Do you like the bits where I talk about it, or should I have just posted the screenshots without any explanation?
So many questions, so few pucks to be received.

Enjoy it or don't. Have a good day ♡