Pure Lust

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Kanehex, Sep 25, 2012.

  1. Enjoy

    Paige and I... we had been friends for so long... bestfriends I told her everything and she did the same. We knew eachothers secrets. We were stuck together like glue but then this happened, let me tell you what happened.My name is Bryce Gain Im in my 12th year of highschool and this is my story.

    ~~Bryce's Pov~~
    We were friends the minute I had moved into my neighborhood in Virginia. We had eachothers back at school and we hungout a lot. I had never had feelings for Paige but then came puberty.

    ~~Paige's POV~~
    Bryce and i had been almost brother and sister since we had met. I dont think he thinks of it like that but I do. He was the only guy (excluding my dad) that I told everything to. Bryce was my close friend nothing was ever supposed to happen between us, but what are you gonna do.
     
  2. Its short but more will come if people read it
     
  3. It's funny my name is Bryce lol
     
  4. Enjoy

    ~~Bryce's POV~~
    Now around 13, 14, 15 years old my horms. kicked in. I had my number of girlfriends and loves but they all faded away. Until there was on that i knew so well, but was also a complete mystery to me. No tingly feeling started in my heart then but more of a burning lust for Paige. I never could tell if she felt the same she was the master of hiding feelings.

    ~~Paige's POV~~
    When Bryce and I were about in eighth grade going into highschool he would give me this smile... no more like a smirk or grin that would set off a bomb in me. A nuclear explosion of wanting him so bad right then and there. I had to have him but I didnt want him at the same time. He was my one gauruntee of closure and time to talk to someone who actually listened and understood.

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    this is only going to be a pretty short story just to let yall know
     
  5. I like it because no only is my name Bryce but the character sounds like me in real life lol
     
  6. Im goin to update one more time tonight just need some more people
     
  7. I really like it
     
  8. Bump!! It's really good!
     
  9. Meh. I suggest that you re-read though, just to fix a couple grammatical errors.