preview to my book

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Take_A_Chance_on_meAKA_PWND, May 1, 2011.

  1. book 1 in a dark ally in orb city....
    Micheal a handsome young magic archer sits and waits for his fiancé Allison. Then suddenly a cariban full of magic orbs passes and takes a sharb turn, when suddenly a bright blue orb falls out. Micheal who is a curious fellow foes and looks at the orb then suddenly a face appears in the orb and it is the face of the prince crying for help. Micheal then knows what is going on but before he can tell someone he hears the scream of Allison. He rushes for his bow and enchanted arrows then sets off in the city.
    By the time he reaches Allison he sees he is already too late by the shape of a cariban in the distance heading towards chaos hill.
    the young adventurer starts off to go rescue Allison but what he dosent know is the challenges he must face first to reach her.
     
  2. I was gonna do a preview of my book 2 after I finish my fanfic
     
  3. Yes how'd you like it
     
  4. It was good.how much of the book d'u get done?
     
  5. I have about six pages typed I've been working on it for six months.I just can't find the time
     
  6. It moves way too fast. Doesn't give you time to properly know the characters.
     
  7. I agree with chew. But that's just minor and easy to fix. Other than that. It's good
     
  8. Yes i've been wanting to finish it for 2 years