Im new too the forums by the way, but here's my first attempt at writing a poem, what do you think? Poor attempt? Not bad for a first try? Give up? I'm sure I'll get negative feedback but just thought I'd share Here at the start, it all seems well But is Slowly drifting all downhill You may not see it, nor ever will But I saw it coming, yet it's no big deal Your not there? Can't say I'm surprised You think all I'm sprouting are nasty lies I'm going under, and so are you I'm taking you with me, which you never knew She says I'm fine and thinks I'm well But she knows a secret that she'll never tell I'm getting worse, becoming more unstable She isn't aware that I've tried the thin cable Has she still not noticed? Of course not Didn't think it took that long to join the dot Were you stalling or just couldn't care less It looks like my parents will be cleaning up the mess 'It's just last resort, don't be so serious' As you told me when I got too curious It's inevitable really, gonna happen one day All a shame really as I have so much too say Im here at the end, do you see why I wrote this? I'd give this all up for one daft kiss You still missed me, you couldn't quite see I'm six feet under, while your watching glee Thank you for reading