Poem- Happiness

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by X_Livi-is-dead_X, Dec 2, 2011.

  1. They smile at me
    I look in denial
    They act so happy
    While I struggle
    Their happy all the time
    While I'm once in awhile
    They laugh and sing and I feel away
    As they enjoy life I watch a cry
    They look oh-so alive
    I look down, and around again
    I know not to give up, because of it

    I send a weak smile
    They know theirs hope in me
    I try to have fun, with my family
    They dance, they sing as I try to know the words
    I sit back down and think of them
    I am all alone
    No one understands me
    I can't see anymore
    Because no one notices me
    I think I'm better off dead
    But I think for a moment
    If I was brought into the world, I must have a purpose
    A smile comes on my face
    I get up and sing
    They look at me, all jolly
    I laugh at the way they dance
    Then I realize, I am holly.


    (this is my first poem ever, please no hate)
     
  2. No, your livi. It was nice, until the last word. Holly doesn't seem right... But it was very beutiful.
     
  3. I suck at poems xD
    Only thing I could think of was Holly, my kitty xD
     
  4. It was really good actually, you just needed a different word there  I Iove cats.
     
  5. I have a doggy and Holly is MY cat but I take care of her and she stays at my house often.