Please read my story in Fan Fiction

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011.

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  1. It's called Wheres my happy ending!? I just want people to like it oh plz tell me if you guys like it
     
    #1 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
  2. I hate it =,= gtfo
     
    #2 Take_A_Chance_on_meAKA_PWND, Dec 16, 2011
  3. Pwnd -.- be nice. If you do not have a nice comment, do not say anything at all =.=
     
    #3 Master-Gonzo-the-Phoenix, Dec 16, 2011
  4. Dont sreal my face=.=
     
    #4 Take_A_Chance_on_meAKA_PWND, Dec 16, 2011
  5. Steal*
     
    #5 Take_A_Chance_on_meAKA_PWND, Dec 16, 2011
  6. Pwnd I bet you wouldn't say that to my face
     
    #6 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
  7. I would said it to your face 
     
    #7 *-Cookie-MoNsTeR- (01), Dec 16, 2011
  8. Sure you would 
     
    #8 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
  9. how old are you?  cuz I don't wanna hit a minor (under 18) if you are
     
    #9 *-Cookie-MoNsTeR- (01), Dec 16, 2011
  10. It's non of your buisness how old I am let's just say I'm a teen writer
     
    #10 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
  11. Making a thread to get people to read another thread? Uncool.
     
    #11 *Cookie0024 (01), Dec 16, 2011
  12. Jeesh I'm not the only one who does it and I just wanted a few more readers
     
    #12 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
  13. 'I'm not the only one who does it'?!

    That is a poor excuse.

    Also, your story is badly written, and is boring. It's also not even a story. It's just what happened to you with a name changed.

    The clue is in the name 'Fan Fiction'. Fiction, yeah?
     
    #13 *Cookie0024 (01), Dec 16, 2011
  14. Dude shouldn't you be doing your job instead of harrasing me
     
    #14 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
  15. he's not harassing you...
     
    #15 *-Cookie-MoNsTeR- (01), Dec 16, 2011
  16. Maybe it's a prologue...?


    I don't know. Mind if I give a few tips? I know I'm not the best writer but still...it might help.
     
    #16 Azarah6, Dec 16, 2011
  17. Oh look a postitive person go right ahead  haters leave my thread
     
    #17 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
  18. there is no person called "haters" on this thread.
     
    #18 *-Cookie-MoNsTeR- (01), Dec 16, 2011
  19. Lol



    Put side comments above or below the entire update. It distracts readers and takes away from the story line. Watch your punctuation. And it needs a big plot. What you've got now seems more like a mini plot with no importance.
     
    #19 Azarah6, Dec 16, 2011
  20. Ty Azarah and yes there are haters here it's you and the rule breaking mod
     
    #20 *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 16, 2011
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