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Ok I just made this up on the spot so ummm....bare with it If there Is room for improvement  thanks

Her pale lips moved so fast. I could hear words but I couldn't tell what she was saying. I didn't care either. All I wanted was this moment here. Me and her sitting on the field,painting pictures in the clouds. It was simple and easy and fun.
With her all my worries were invisible, but when she went they all appeared again. As I walk down the garden path and hear the stones crunch underneath my weight I know as I open that door he will be there, waiting for me. And there is nothing I can do to stop it.......






But what if I could ? What if there was another option ? In those few minutes I had to make a decision. I stood there, one hand on the front door knob, another clutching my phone. In a flash of lightening my hand was moving my hand pulled away from the door and my legs started to run. I swung open the gate and sprinted down the road. I heard It slam behind me, I heard cars whizzing past. I heard thoughts running through my head. I had done it. I was free from HIM.
I had slowed down now. Every few seconds I would stop jogging and walk for a while. I didn't know where my legs were taking me but they kept going. It was to late to return now. However the grin on my face quickly changed when I heard a shout from behind
'chris,get back here you little shit'
Fuck he had followed me. My eyes were darting through all the possible ways to turn now. I bolted towards the woods. Running and running. I didn't notice the pain in my muscles. I didnt want too.
As i ducked and jumped trying to avoid obstacles, Branches grabbed and tore at my clothes. Thousands of arms seemed to be reaching in for me, clawing continuously at my face and arms.the strong wind blowed my hair. I let out a grunt as I hurled myself over a tall log but soon picked myself back up again.
My eyes were still searching through the trees. All I could see were trees.
'Chris'
The shout came again, this time they it was further away.
"no,no,no" I mumbled.
My vision started to become blurry with tears. I wiped my eyes with the back of my sleeve.
'Oy Chris'
It was nearer this time.
'fuck' i whispered angrily, punching the tree.
I was stuck, I didn't know where to go, what to do !
Suddenly it struck me, the den !! My legs started to sprint again. This time I knew where I was going........



Please let me know what u thought  sorry for mistakes but i just literally made it up as i typed  thank you for your time

 

Anyone ???

 

Me neither tbh lolz

 

I don't know yet. Lolz

 

Thanks everyone 

 

Anymore feedback ???

 

Ok u can be the girl chris likes. Is that ok ??

 

Cool I'm 12

 

My body slammed into the ancient wood of the den. I crawled through the entrance and put my back to the wall. I was alone now, it was just me and the silence. The cold air was breathing down my neck as the darkness stared at me. I must of sat there for about a hour. Just listening for more shouts, I wasn't sure if he had given up.
At about 9:00 I came to the conclusion that he had stopped looking for me. he was probably sitting at home infront of the fire,warm and comfy without a care in the world. Me however, my mind was filled with worries, what do I eat ? Where can I sleep ? Where will I go ?
Shivering myself to sleep in the corner of the den. My heart was still racing from the chase, every owl twoot, dog bark, and voice I would jump out of my skin. Sometimes I would talk to myself, all I needed was another person here it was to lonely by myself.
I wanted ------ here. I needed her to tell me everything was going to be ok in her Liverpool accent. I wandered if she would run with me ?? She was always moaning about school, home, life. That was it, I had made up my mind. In the morning I would go to ----- house. But not now. It was dark outside and the world is a scary place........

Soz bout the ---- I forgot the girls name. Thanks for ur time  hope you enjoyed

 

------ is emma