Playing the Player

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Mraz-Man (01), Jan 15, 2012.

  1. Playing the player 

    ~Chapter One~

    Finally it's summer! I get to go to the beach, sail and surf whenever I want. It's the first week of July, which for me means the first day of Summer Camp, I used to love it, I have a bunch of friends there and we do a lot of sports, but there is one reason why I hate it, Luke Haley, we used to be the best of friends but now, he's a total jerk.
    I twist my long blonde hair up into a high bun, with a braid at the front, put on my black bikini and threw a striped yellow shirt and jeans shorts on over it. "Dominic, it's time to go," my mom screamed from downstairs. I put on my water proof mascara, grabbed my bag and headed out the door. Can't wait to get there, ya I bet you can sense the sarcasm.

    My phone started buzzing, it was a text from my friend Lisa

    =Lisa =Me

     Hey where are you? Luke's looking for you!
     I'm almost there, what does he want?
    Idk lemme ask
     Dammit he won't tell me
     Ok well it doesn't matter I'm in the parking lot now see ya soon.

    I grabbed my phone and my bag and went inside. I was greeted by some of my friends, and a tall, tanned muscular guy, wearing a green tshirt and swim teinks,with brown hair leaning on my locker, it was Luke. I walked over to my locker to put my stuff in, "What do you want?" I asked while stuffing my bag in, and not making eye contact.
    "Oh come on, Dominic, I just came to say hello,"
    "Well you have said hello, can you leave now?"
    "Don't be such a grouch,"
    "Well you seem to have that effect on people don't you?"
    "Cute, smart and funny, all the qualities I like in a girl,"
    "Are you trying to hit on me?" I said still not making eye contact
    "Yes, I most definitely am,"
    I closed my locker door, turned to face him and looked right into his brown eyes, "I hate to break it too you but it's not working,"
    He seemed to shake it off and continue, "So, did you miss me,"
    "Yes Luke of course I missed you,"
    "Really?"
    "Nope," I said and walked away.
    "Dang! That Luke is looking Fine!" said my friend Georgia.
    "Ugh, he drives me insane!"
    They all laughed, then I felt a hand touch my shoulder, "Excuse me," I heard a voice behind me
     
  2. Sorry the curse I did it on a diff game... And my friends accually did the back and forth texts
     
  3. Good! First bump!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. Being nice?
     
  5. CONTINUE. THIS IS SO TRUE.
     
  6. Continue please!!!! I love this so far!!!!

    BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. Should I continue
     
  8. Hell yeah!
     
  9. BUMP


    UPDATE ALREADY!!!!
     
  10. BUMP!! This is good..continue updating pls..I WANT MOARR^^ lol
     
  11. If u guys could wall me characters and maybe the next move in this story that would be helpful
     
  12. It's coming soon