PIMD

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014.

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  1. I see the world how it is
    Survival of the fittest
    Jerks hurt weak people
    We are targeted
    They read weakness on posts
    They read weakness when you reply
    Evil people attack the weakest people
    Survive, and hurt the evil people
    Survive, and fight to the end
    You cannot die alone
     
    #1 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  2. Thus post is weak.
     
    #2 NO-ONE-HERE, Mar 25, 2014
  3. This
     
    #3 NO-ONE-HERE, Mar 25, 2014
  4. Alas! Someoneth has posted! But seriously shush, it's not weak
     
    #4 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  5. OK :cry:
     
    #5 NO-ONE-HERE, Mar 25, 2014
  6. Lol
     
    #6 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  7. If you want me to, I can quit sharing my poems lol, just gotta say they are weak :3 then bye bye
     
    #7 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  8. Lol nice poem 
     
    #8 cloudycuddles, Mar 25, 2014
  9. Thanks, I make every poem to my hearts desire, this one wasn't as great as the other ones
     
    #9 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  10. YOLO brothaaaa
     
    #10 00_SpitFire, Mar 25, 2014
  11. Hey spit, I'm back from a day of hell XD
     
    #11 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  12. Did you say hello to satan for me?
     
    #12 00_SpitFire, Mar 25, 2014
  13. No, he smashed my window and scared the shit outta two children
     
    #13 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  14. Regarding this post, don't poems usually rhyme? I didn't really see rhyming. YOU NEED TO GRAPS THE TRUE ESSENCE OF YOUR INNER POTENTIAL ~
     
    #14 00_SpitFire, Mar 25, 2014
  15. In other words ^ it was crap.

    But work on it.
     
    #15 00_SpitFire, Mar 25, 2014
  16. It doesn't matter if it rhymes, as long as it has a message in it it's a poem, like "life and death" or "...."
     
    #16 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  17. Possibly.
     
    #17 00_SpitFire, Mar 25, 2014
  18. What do you mean "possibly"?
     
    #18 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
  19. Then it wouldn't be considered a poem, right? But like a speech or something?
     
    #19 00_SpitFire, Mar 25, 2014
  20. Not really a speech but whatevs
     
    #20 LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Mar 25, 2014
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