People From The Shadows

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Jessica_Hotty (01), Aug 10, 2011.

  1. The door bell rings, then rings again. I wonder who it can be? I just moved in two days ago. I run down the steps saying,"Hold on I'm coming". When I opened the door a middle age couple was standing there. " Hi I'm Heather I said politely. Hi I'm Angie and this is my husband Jerad. I invited them in to have a seat. Nice place you got considering that its haunted. Angie's husband smacked her on the shoulder and gave her a look. Sorry for Angie Jerad said. She believes in the local ghost stories. Well I would like to hear them I said with curiosity. I sat down near Angie. Well it all started two years ago when a young women around your age went missing. Police came to investigate her house. Everything seemed normal but coffee was still on the table, the TV was still on also. They searched the rest of the house but nothing came up. A year later a family moved in and started reporting sights of a women around 23 haunting there house. People thought they where crazy till the whole family went missing also.The room was dead silent. So silent you can hear a pen drop. A glass fell of the shelf and startled everyone. So who moved in after the family I said. You did said Angie. I was shocked and angry. How dare you come in MY house and tell me this non sense I said full of anger. Angie and Jerad left my house. I could here them arguing all the way down the drive way. For the rest of the day I didn't really think much about what Angie had told me.
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    At midnight a ear curdling scream echoed through the entire house. I woke up in a puddle of sweat. Soon a misty figure of a young girl was at the foot of my bed. She was about seven years old. She had red straight hair pulled into a neat ponytail. She put her finger on her lip and said quiet or they will get you. She signaled me to follow her and I did. In the back of my head I was thinking am u crazy. I walked down the hall into the bathroom. That's where the girl vanished . I stayed in there for a while. Soon I was pushed through the wall. I was in a whole new place. Chills ran down my spine . I was by myself, cold, and scared. I was creeped out. A ugly woman appeared in front of me. Her face was messed up. Then she mouthed you are next two times then vanished. I woke up screaming. It was morning time and time for me to explore. Maybe I should go to the libart and get info on the people who lived here and this house.
    Chapter~2
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  2. Great story!!
     
  3. Chapter~2
    I drive down to the state library. There not a lot of cars in the parking lot. When I walk in a old lady approaches me. Hi hun she said how may I help you? I'm looking for records and documents on West View Dr. 2456. The old lady seemed concerned when I gave her the address. What is it I said.O nothing darling nothing to worry your little buttons about. She smiled then lead me to the computer filled with all the documents in Spring Lake.When I type in my address five pages of info came up. As I was reading something caught my eye. It said before this house was a house it was a funeral home. Not just any funeral home, it was the funeral home where all the murders went after death in prison. A cold hand touched my shoulder. I jumped out the seat knocking the chair down. The old lady was standing there. I'm sorry to startle you but your time is up she said. May I print out this before I go I asked Sure the lady hit a few buttons and the pages where printed out. I was shocked and scared. Maybe I should grab a bite to eat. I went to "Papa's Diner" for lunch. While I was waiting on my waiter, A handsome young man sat in front of me.Hi, I'm Ryan he said. Hi, I'm Heather.May I join you for lunch he said. Sure. What you got there? He leaned over to get a peek. O you live in that haunted house he said. Ya I guess so I said shyly. What do you know about the house I said. Well when I was little my ma told me never to step foot in that house. So I listened but I'm 23 and still scared to even step on the lawn. Well I don't wanna scare you he said so bye. I waved bye then left the diner. What's up with this house I said. My car engine screamed as I turned the key and off I went back to funeral home.
     
  4. good story but u need to remember quotation marks