Orphanage 13

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Simply_Fox (01), Sep 29, 2011.

  1. Chapter one
    Veiw: Ariana

    I'd like to say it was a big dramatic day when I arrived at Orphanage 13. Actually the day was perfect. Clear blue skies, white clouds and kids of various ages on the lawns. Only one thing was weird. The kids weren't playing ball, they were sword fighting.

    I walked quickly down the cracked walkway to the large doors. I swear a a six year old hacked off an inch of my hair on the way in. The hall was huge, no not huge, but HUGE. Like you could fit 400 elephants in it and no one would notice.

    My heels had clacked quite loudly on the floor, causing a small squat man to waddle at me
     
  2. "Hello, I'm Mr. D. You must be one of the new kids," he said none to gruffly. He clearly doesn't like anyone under forty. I simply nod. This guy was scarier than Chuck Norris.

    "What is your name," Mr. D asked very slowly. I stared at him blankly with my green eyes. He sighed I coughed. Someone stepped behind me.

    "I'll go first," a deep voice spoke. I spun around, tripping over myself in the process. A dark hand grabbed my elbow. I looked up that hand attached to a grey hoodie sleeve. I looked up some more. A dark face with a scar under one and a smirk.

    I pull my arm away. "Ariana," I said at the same time that guy said "Nate."
     
  3. This is one of the most interesting pieces I've seen on here yet! Please continue :) love you. 
     
  4. Love you more quanchy
     
  5. I looked at this hunk and sighed. I hoped he wasn't in my cabin. I had been around him for five minutes and wanted to bang my head off a wall.

    "I'm guessing your Ariana and I'm Nate," the wise guy next me had asked. I face-palmed, hard. Mr. D. broke the pencil in his hand. Nate looked chill. Like he was used to being so annoying people wanted to stab him.

    "Well the dorms are up there. Ariana, you know where you go. Nate you need to go to the Hermes dorm and wait to be claimed," The portly man gagged on Nate's name like it was a bad word.
     
  6. Bump!!!!!!!! Plz!!!!!!!
     
  7. I love mythology! Continuation soon?
     
  8. Hehe, big word
     
  9. Oh, and...Chuck Norris?!?!?! He once had a heart attack, his heart lost.
     
  10. Houdini could take off your shoes without you noticing but Chuck Norris can take off you socks without taking off your shoes
     
  11. Chuck Norris didn't play halo,HE LIVE THE DAMNED THING HIMSELF.


    Even though me and tanner are still on level 5.....
     
  12. I quickly rushed up the staircase, not caring when I twisted my ankle.
    It was my first day at a secret location for Demigods, who wouldn't be
    excited?
    * - * - * - * - * - * - * - * - * - * - * - * - *
    I know the general area of my dorm; up to the third floor, take a
    left, and then I'm lost. There's four doors, two on each side. Small
    symbols decorate the tops of the doors. I try to make out shapes but
    they aren't drawings. Their Greek letters, Ω,ψ, θ, and ΓΞ. I can't
    figure out what room is mine, in fact I only recognize one letter, Ω,
    omega. I don't remember what it means either.

    I'm about to give up when a short girl with long black hair and little
    make up comes running up the hall. "Seeya later Adam," she called at
    some guy. The girl barreled into my stomach. I "ompfed". "Sorry,
    didn't see you there," she sorta laughed, her dark complexion still
    flushed from being with a guy.

    "I'm okay," I lied.
    "Are you new," she asks.
    "Yea, I'm Ariana."
    Her almond eyes go wide, "You're the new hunter?"
    "Yes, I didn't know it was such a big deal."
    "It's just that we don't get new people regularly, let alone five at
    once and one of them being a huntress! Oh, sorry, I have a tendency to
    ramble... I'm Sarah."
    "Nice to meet you Sarah. I need some help at the moment."
    "Lets guess, you can't find your cabin?"
    I nod. She laughs.
    "No matter what your dorm will be the one with the omega on it, omega
    means good in Greek. And if you think your dorm with be that one."
    "I feel stupid!"
    "Don't, they do this every time. It gets old. Well I gotta run. Bye!"

    Sarah disappears through a door on the left. I study the symbols
    again, the door in the right has the omega. I feel like I should
    knock, but I know this is going to be my home so it'd be strange. I
    bite my lip and open the door.
     
  13. Scarier than chuck Norris?!?!?! 
     
  14. MORE!  I loooove it!
     
  15. Yes Sal. Mr. D. is based on my 5 ft two science teacher.
     
  16. Point was meant for ice. And is he that scary lol?
     
  17. He put mean things in my year book and when we did a lab on taste. He didn't put sugar in the koolaid then blamed it on me
     
  18. Wow. That's mean of him
     
  19. Haha. Sorta. it gets worse as the year progresses

    Oh btw anyone who posts on this I post on their wall after I update