One Life To Live

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoryRENAMED, Jan 26, 2012.

  1. Hi guys! I wrote a new story. I have to thank my history teacher for this whole entire idea. Thanks Mr.N! Okay! Story time! Enjoy! Tell your friends!
    -Melly

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    Morning. The warmest part of the day. The sun beamed through my glass window, like an invader of my home. It illuminated the entire room, creating a glow on the baby blue walls. To the right of me was Mary. Mary Williams, the girl I would be wed to in a month, was wrapped up in a white sheet, sound asleep. Her shoulder length chestnut hair perfect places on her back. I move slowly, and kissed her on the top of her head, and got out of bed. I wandered to the kitchen, to make a cup of coffee. On the fridge, was my calendar, marked with a circle around today. The words read "apply." Today was the day I would apply for the military.
     
  2. Aww thanks guys! 

    -Melly
     
  3. That's all? ._. It's good so I was hoping for more
     
  4. I know. I'm writing now.
     
  5. I shall say bump it's good we'll described making it a vivid picture
     
  6. OMG. I TOLD YOU IT WOULD BE AWESOME. AND IT IS. I LOVE IT. BUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMP!
     
  7. TGx approves!!
     
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    ATTENTION- I am changing the name of Mary. Her new name will now be Mary Valenti. Mary Williams didn't suit me enough. Thanks for continuing to read!
    With love,
    Melly
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  9. PARTYFREAKLOVER- Thank you so much:)

    Nugget_Train- Shmanks! 

    JamesNovember- Thank you! I was joining for that. That is my main goal with this story, besides for it to be good! 

    TheAndi- aww thank you:) your stories are better! I love them. I'm hooked

    Hunter- haha, thanks! 

    -Melly
     
  10. Awww, thanks! I'm hooked on YOUR stories tooo! 
     
  11. Okay. Short update now! Really have to get this out! More coming directly after this update. Tonight. Thanks guys for all the support. Ti amo

    With love,
    Melly

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    The draft was sent out last week. Or at least that's when I heard of it. I hope with everything I have that I don't get chosen. I could run away. But I don't have enough. I am on Jake Ryder from the small town of Rich Creek, Virginia. I wouldn't have enough money or spirit to flee to another country, continuing I go through with the wedding, and are for my family. Momma was very sick, and Pop had just died. I need to stay here, but I also needed to stay safe.
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  12. EPICNESS
     
  13.  its awesome