well.....um........good story? I felt like it was awesome, but it's kinda pointless, no offense. WORDS, MAN WORDS! I SEEK FOR ALOT OF WORDS!
Omg! This is the best story ever! I must tell the whole world this magnificent story to the world!!!!
Brilliant!!! my favorite story yet! But one thing is try to make it a bit shorter, i had trouble reading all the words