Once Upon A Time

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by -Alyloony-, May 4, 2017.

  1. Once upon a time ATA has a favorite.
    And that is you. You are happy that he
    never fails to surprise you with rare drops
    and the boxes you opened has always good
    items on it.

    Once upon a time ATA is happy that he has
    you as his favorite player. For you never fail
    to visits and play with him. He is happy that
    you never complained on what he can provide
    you. But that once upon a time has changed.

    Since that day you decided to left him for good.
    But ATA continues to wait for you. Hoping that his beloved and favorite you, will come back again to play with him. But years had passed he began to accept that you will never come back. Until such time he upgraded and everything changed

    Now you came back hoping you're reunion will be memorable because you hoped that he will be glad to see you again. And you're right. ATA is happy knowing you came back! But the day you came back you noticed something.

    ATA has a new favorite now. And thats not you.
    You noticed that the drops he gave you is not as special like before. And everytime you opened box, your heart aches for its not what u expect to be. And because of that, you asked told yourself "I should have never came back"
     
  2. Fix it NOW, Grammar and word errors
     
  3. And gosh please stick with either third person or second person
     
  4. Seek help or something
    Get a hobby perhaps
     
  5. You repeated "once upon a time" twice. Therefore I'm gonna have to give you a No Support.
     
  6. A good story… is that about me?
     

  7. Corrected some grammar. Not bad tbh
     
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  9. I know this story. ?
     
  10. The End.
    Bai
     
  11. I expected this to be about the TV show tbh.
     
  12. Last line ?
     
  13. What kinda mess?
     
  14. I thought this was a fan thread for OUAT series.. Disappointed :-(
     
  15. Same..
     

  16. But the problem is she never promised that this thread would be fun lmao hahaha