Ok this is my Story. It has no title yet. I'm not good at su

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Xyleena (01), Mar 2, 2012.

  1. Ch-1 The Twins
    The boys were in their small room, which would have been very messy if they had any belongings besides a bunk bed, two desks, and a trunk. The walls of their room were a soft blue other than that extremely bare. The bunk beds were placed along the wall. At the end of the bed sat the intricately carved trunk and then the door. To the left of the door there is a circle drawn with chalk. Inside it are two cushions at opposite ends, and four vanilla scented candles on each side of the cushions.
    "Raven and Sasha come here" a man hollered to the youngsters. The boys, who were sitting on the cushions yelled in unison "What do you want Koron?" We are quite busy working in our- Koron suddenly Appeared in the room and glared at the twins.
     
  2. Sweet thanks :) I already have more written out I just wanted to give a little before I type a long thing out haha
     
  3. Re: Ok this is my Story. It has no title yet.

    Raven and Sasha's mouth snapped shut and, Koron started to examine them. They were identical twins with spiky blue hair and golden eyes. They're about five feet tall and extremely thin. They both had an unusual butterfly tattoo on their face, which highlighted their girly beauty they worked so hard to hide. They act much that fourteen. That's why Koron, as the leader, treats them like he does every other member in the group. After he finished studying them he coldly said' "I heard that all before, and do not need to hear it again. You two are lazy, and like to neglect your work so you use that as an excuse to get out of meetings." Raven and Sasha looked up into Koron's sad brown eyes smirking.
     
  4. Thanks :) I got more wish more people would review!!