Of Max' Dark Cloud

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nosquib, Dec 30, 2014.

  1. I wanted to post a poem of mine. Here goes:

    The grime of past has a habit of setting Max up.
    He tries to flick off the dust
    Of what once long should be forgotten
    As if to alter the black and white and come anew
    Goes slinging hard and sit afterwards
    For fortnights but still, the dust comes back

    Max wakes in the morning
    And walks the clearer alley of the mind
    He unknowingly goes down the stairs
    To depth deeper at nights
    Pacing slow, one foot after another
    The further he steps down and down
    The more the cold and silence make his breathing heavy
    But all this for naught
    For something more sinister awaits at the bottom
    Vivid.
    A true nightmare.