Nobody Cares

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by tash777, Mar 22, 2014.

  1. May as well post it here too.

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    Nobody cares

    Stop crying, nobody cares,
    Stop crying, nobody's there,

    Stop crying, nobody will listen,
    Alone in the dark, your tears they glisten,

    But nobody will see, nobody knows,
    The pain you are in, behind closed doors,

    Stop crying, stop crying, you're wasting water,
    Stop crying, stop crying, you poor little daughter,

    Your tears are worthless, just like you,
    Your crying is useless, like you too,

    All that you do shall amount to nothing,
    Work harder, do more, no matter how crushing,

    Never complain, don't say a word,
    Your quiet thoughts remain unheard,

    A blade to your wrist won't change a thing,
    It won't make things better; just make things sting,

    Your blood is not looked at, the scars are not seen,
    You are but an extra on movie scene,

    Unimportant, unneeded, no lines,
    Ignored in the background, ignored are the signs,

    She kept her mouth closed, thinking nobody cares,
    But nobody knew the suffering she bears,

    So nobody helped her, nobody did,
    Nobody watched as she cowered and hid,

    It all got too much, but only she knew,
    The fate she'd now set nobody could undo,

    Something was wrong, but nobody knew,
    It's too late now, her body lay askew,

    We don't want to know how much you have bled.
    Nobody hears your crying once you are dead.
     
  2. This poem was so good that it gave me goosebumps.
     
  3. Good poem, a little morbid, but really good.
     
  4. Morbid tends to be my style. Thank you :)
     
  5. I'm gonna bump this because I'm too lazy to write something new.
     
  6. Your story version of this was better oh wait I totally helped you write some of that
     
  7. I don't care

    I love it
     
  8. Oh ya it's great but she wrote a story about a boy that was just haunting
     
  9. Are you actually talking about Goodbye Cruel World? <3 #takemeback


    …to when I barely went on this game.
     
  10. Yes yes I am
     
  11. Oh my god I loved that story! :3 It's my favourite that I've read here ahah.

    This is good too. :D I don't usually like poems but I like this. :3
     
  12. I'm glad you like it ️I've actually been meaning to revamp Goodbye Cruel World, I think I could rewrite it much better now that I've got more experience and a wider vocabulary. I read some of the first few paragraphs and just cringe...
     
  13. What about bloodlust? D:
     
  14. That's too old and crap for me to save. Maybe one day I'll try and do something with it, I had like eight whole books planned for it ._.
     
  15. And you didn't even finish the first one.?
     
  16. I loved Goodbye Cruel World
     
  17. I ACTUALLY EDITED THE FIRST PART OF GCW SHOULD I REPUBLISH IT
     
  18. OF COURSE DONT EVEN ASK