Me and my English friend wrote this, but this is only the first chapter. Feedback, please! Lou sobbed heavily, her chest heaving. She was very self conscious, being around the boy she liked. Lou was into a very charming boy, and few years above her in school. She had just been 'visited' by the rude, stuck-up girls who bullied her. Molly and Keara were certainly not on her Christmas card list. "Stop crying!" she scolded herself, feeling her cheeks turning a warm shade scarlet. "Um, are you, er, okay?" a voice said. 'Crap' Lou thought 'James can't see me like this! Breathe woman!' Lou took a deep breath and nodded. "Yeah, thanks." "You sure? I'm James by the way" 'as if I didn't know that...' "Oh, hi! I'm Lou" She felt her cheeks cooling, and looked up into his sea blue eyes. James was the boy. He had jet black hair, grown not too long, curling up softly at the bottom of his neck. His eyes were hypnotic, a deep sea blue perfect for getting lost in. "What happened?" James asked, flicking his hair and sitting next to her. 'I fell in love with you' Lou thought. "Erm, some girls were being stupid." "How?" James looked genuinely concerned, his eyes revealing what he didn't. "Well, to be honest, they have been bullying me for a while now..." Lou admitted, the scarlet colour bleeding back into her cheeks. James frowned and stood up. "Where are they?" "Well, erm its okay no-" "No it's not, where are they?" James looked so angry, she almost tripped over the words as she spat them out hastily. "Just up behind the art block" "C'mon, I'll sort them out!" He took Lou's hand and led her towards the top field. 'Oh my gosh. He's holding my hand!' Her heart flipped in her chest as she neared Keara and Molly. "Ar-r-are you sure about this?" She stuttered. She was breathing heavily now, and sweat was pouring out of her. "Yeah I am, are you okay?" He turned to face her and smiled his heart melting smile. "Yeah, thanks by the way." "No sweat, point the way!" James let go of her hand and stood next to her. Lou pointed towards the two figures facing away from her. That laugh shook her ears, and she shivered with fear. "Th-them." James smiled and took her hand again. "Head up, they won't dare look at you when I'm done!" He straightened himself up, showing his height, and strolled towards Molly and Keara, leading Lou. "Oi. You two!" Molly and Keara spun around, scowls plastered on their hideous faces. "Whaddya you want, lanky?' Keara sneered. "I want you to keep away from Lou, or you'll regret it. You know you will Molly, so don't try it. If I hear you bother her once more in her entire lifetime, you'll be worshiping her and kissing her feet. You hear me?" Lou looked at the bullies, and smiled contently at their solemn faces. 'Hes so hot. Hot hot hot hot...' was all Lou was thinking when he took her towards the art block. He smiled, and said "Come with me, I need to get some lunch from the canteen. Fancy a slice of pizza?" Lou smiled and nodded, looking into his eyes. They spent the rest of lunch chatting, and sharing jokes. Until the bell rung unexpectedly. "I've got history, so I'll see you later!" Lou smiled. "what way do you walk home?" James questioned, walking her to her lesson. "Through the bottom gate and then up the hill" "So do I! I'll meet you here okay? How about we go to the brook? Lou grinned, her eyes sparkling. "Yeah!" She waved goodbye and walked into her lesson, buzzing.