I ran through the forest the night tails of darkness behind me. Twigs scratched my face frequently as the night watchers followed. Their gas masks heavy on their face as they are not immune as I am, to the deathly gas. My heart pounded against my chest, I wouldn't last much longer. Shay followed close to me, our hands in twined as we raced in the shadows of blackish blue. Arrows shot through the air each one risking our lives my mind was set on getting back to the warehouse. I needed to get there soon…
Shay POV Her beautiful chocolate hair shone in the moonlight, blowing in the dark wind. I wanted to lie with her to forget about the night watchers. To just sit next to a tree and love her... Rapidly my mind turned back to the situation on hand. I pounded on my breath hot and quick. I could see it in the distance the barricaded warehouse. But I knew we had no chance if we didn't kill them. Abruptly Taylor retrieved her dagger from her belt and whipped us both round behind a tree. The night watchers raced passed not noticing us. She threw it expertly sliding in to the three of them, till they fell to the ground in two pieces each…
Taylor POV I strode over to the mangled bodies (if you could call it a body) pale green skin caked in slime. I lifted off the mask revealing the disgusting, repulsive gnarled face of the night watchers. Thick blood spattered all over the floor. I turned to look at Shay he met my eyes slowly. He came towards me wrapping his arms around my waist pulling me closer every second. My eyes dropped to his leather jacket, my head dropping slightly. He was a lot taller than me his dark, chestnut hair fell over his face. He lifted my chin making me stare in to his brown eyes. "You did it."he whispered smiling into me his smile always bored straight in to my heart. "No," I said tracing my finger along his cheek "We did it.". We set off in to the night towards the dimly lit warehouse. Knowing there could always be more, watching us… Waiting for us… Somewhere…
It's good, very detailed! The only problem you have is punctuation. A few more commas would really help. :3 I look forward to seeing more chapters later! :3
Shay POV As my footsteps crashed on the dark grass my eyes flickered over her body. She was so beautiful, took my breath away. Her perfect slender curves, deep azul eyes. Why she dates me I don't know. I feel she's too good for me, like she should be with someone more worthy. I'm just too scared to ask… "Shay?" Taylor whispered, her breath hot on my cheek. I snapped out of my thoughts and smiled at her gorgeous face. " Yes Tay?" I replied longingly " Do we have to go back tonight? We could camp out in the woods! Just for tonight?" She gazed in to my eyes her bottom lip wobbled. How could I say no? "Sure sweetheart. As long as we stay close to the border of the woods. I can't have you getting hurt! Where would my fuck buddy be then?!" I grinned at her she always understood my jokes, unlike the others at the warehouse. Most of them were either too simple to understand it or too serious and unrealaxed to find it funny. Taylor POV I snaked my arm round his neck and slid on to the floor pulling Shay with me. I leaned my forehead against his as my fingers lightly, tracing over his scars. "Dont… I'm sorry I have them. They make me look so… Bad..." Shay looked down, staring at my chest (which I didn't mind). He looked ashamed…
" Don't say that to me! I think you're beautiful inside and out! I fricking love you baby, if you want to stay together you need to stop thinking you're not good enough... If you weren't trust me I wouldn't have gone out with you in the first place. I love you don't ever doubt yourself."I caressed his face with kisses, until my lips met his. I coaxed open his mouth with my own as he kissed me passionately. I hated the fact that he had no idea how much I love him, how much I need him… "Ok. I love you too. My beautiful oreo girl!" Shay murmured against my mouth, as his hand slipped up me to cup my breast. I lightly touched his abs and slender strong arms. I truly love his strength and battle scars, in my eyes they were so sexy.
I'll never understand why he's so self conscious my beautiful boyfriend. It didn't used to be like this. Shay used to be just like my best friend, the one I'd go to when I cried, the one I'd ask to make me laugh. But I think I always knew he wanted more from me. The longing in his eyes… It's what I still see in him today, like when we were running. I always can feel his eyes running over my body, I could feel it then. I like that about him, that he would just be satisfied enough to just sit and watch me. It's vice versa too! I'm not ever going to let him go and I trust him too much to think that he doesn't think the same about me.
Shay POV I rolled off of Taylor knowing soon I was going to hurt her from my weight. " What's wrong? Are you not in the mood for me or am I just bad at this?" Taylor asked, she turned away from me, shamed. "Oreo girl! That is so not it I just don't wanna hurt you, I'm so heavy!" I reassured her. I shuffled up behind her, pressing my body against her back. Sensing she felt my boner press into her perfect bum. She turned around to face me, her long, lucious lashes fluttering. She wrapped her legs around my waist. I sat up so we were in a position where she had a leg either side of me and was looking down at me. My hands pulled her head closer so I could kiss her. She lifted off my shirt revealing my scars and muscle. I stopped… "Look at me Taylor, look at the horrible scars. Why d'you love me? This?" She pulled of her own shirt and traced at least five scars running along her stomach and chest. "I could ask you the same thing?" She shot me a quizzical look, clearly expecting an answer.
" Because it doesn't matter to me, I'll always love you whether you look like a night watcher or as beautiful as you are now" Shay replied easily with not a single hint of a teasing smile. " Exactly, it doesnt matter to me in fact if I'm being truthful, it makes you even sexier. Really I hope it's not so hard to understand that it's something I like… A sense of manliness Shay." I gazed at him all the while I was telling him. " Taylor?" Shay asked "Yes?" I murmured " Come here." he ordered. Quickly I scrambled over to him confused. He laid down, silently waiting for me to lay on top of him. I did as he wanted, kicking off my my black lace ups. Shay POV I put my hands behind her back and un clipped her bra. Her eyes widened as she knew what was happening. I stopped instantly. "D'you not want to? I feel like its time, we've never done it before…" I stared at her. "I do. I love you." she said. A grin spread across my face. She pressed her lips against mine and we undressed each other slowly… ------------------------- (morning) I'd done it! It was magical, she was magical! Wow! My dream girl is beautiful and amazing! Brilliant! Her eyes fluttered open a warm blanket was draped over us. "Morning Sunshine" She chirped. I threw my arms around her, happy to just stay there forever. I took my iPhone out of my pocket. Even after no TV, no anything but phone connection and electricity! Somehow my phone worked. 9am. " Taylor I should get some clothes on." I groaned " What about me?" she said sarcastically. " What you? Nah you don't need clothes I prefer you without them." We grinned lovingly as we quickly dressed. ----------------------------- (At the warehouse) Taylor POV " TAYLOR, SHAY! WHERE THE FUCK HAVE YOU BEEN?" Raven screamed from his chair. "We camped in the woods! Stop being so fucking uptight Raven!"Shay replied aggressively. "You," Raven pointed his finger at me " Do you have to go out every night? You've never camped out before! I suppose you were just fucking each other" he spat at me and Shay. Shat grabbed my hand ignoring him. He lead me to our room, I collapsed on the bed curling into a ball. A tear trickled down my face. " Hey baby don't cry. Raven isn't worth it" Shay came close behind me and covered me as if he was my sheild, his broad shoulders covered me perfectly. "Why does my brother hate me so much Shay? What did I do?" I turned round and sobbed in to his chest.
I don't read much, but this was great and I am interested in seeing more. P.s what are the Night Watchers? Are they aliens or mythical creatures? Dosnt matter if we're not meant to know.
Oh and cam don't worry about seeing more I've been doing this for two days and I've updated 8 times I plan to update every day