New Theme Park.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Orisel (01), Sep 1, 2012.

  1. "Wow." I said as I walked into the new park. It was a big park but the queues weren't big because it was a new park. Everyone was screaming with fun until I saw it happen. It made me gulp. A big roller coaster, which sends you up into the air, fell of the track killing about six people. I nearly cried. I wanted to run home but I'm
    not a wimp... am I?
     
  2. (short but I have to go out, hope you enjoy)
     
  3. Ohmygosh nobody reads 
     
  4. It's....okay I guess. :roll:
     
  5. It finally has a reader:L
     
  6. It's pretty good, make the next one longer
     
  7. Make it longer n more detail other than that good