Knowledge is pain What's the purpose when, you realise life has no purpose Or maybe you just can't find it You try hard to be happy and hide it Cause you miserable inside And everyone who tell you that the meaning is enjoying it at the time You know damn well it's a lie How can you enjoy a time when you know someone else across the world is getting killed Am I suppose to sit around and laugh when blood spilled on your hands I might not know you but that don't mean I don't know love and loss Someone getting raped dont mean it's lust It coulda been my daughter, sister, aunt, mama, neice that damn got taped locked and got reported lost How am I suppose to shed light when I know an ignorant mediocre got picked to lead the country I live in My brother 4 year's old and you think I'm not concerned on the environment and social standards he's gonna hold I maybe be seventeen but I live my life like a nightmare because I can't seem to be able to dream Nothing's sound in the cloud of doubt that hangs over my drought I haven't written in 6 months now Why would I come back How could light be in the room that was once full of color and is now black For the same reason I started to rap The ability of expressing who I really am and what I feel Being able to put my emotions to words and motivate you, tell a story and keep it real
I didn’t mind it too much. I don’t think you really want me to critique it though. You just wanted me to read it and enjoy it. So yeah.
It's alright. Sometimes it rhymes and sometimes it doesn't so idk what kind of poem it's supposed to be
Ignorance is numbness. The imperfection of reality is all that's real. Gotta fix that stuff, boi. Purpose is to fix that stuff, and to make knowledge feel better. Yeah, might be without a goal or a clear view of how to make things better. Pain is basically a human thing. Why are you pretending to be happy? What morons are asking you to put that face on? is it you? Why do you wanna do that? If you gotta cry, cry it out. Short-term/sighted hedonism? I mean, that's just one perspective. Everybody seems to have their own purpose for living. SO FKN MANY DIFFERENT REASONS FOR SO MANY PEOPLE. You can borrow one How can you not enjoy a time when you know someone else across the world is getting their funk on, or a lady just gave birth? or a kid just graduated college, adopted a dog, ate a bombastic spicy wing, is having a dance cause they found some luck. You choose to focus on the negatives, the negative emotions related to it will be mirrored in your mind. Try to master your own fickle head. I was thinking about that Scottish Youtuber guy who makes all those Learn quick videos, and his over-the-top reactions. You can force yourself to be happy, and train yourself by forcing smiles when you do good things even if your smile never sees sunlight. Just bring it out when you want it to come out, and when you want to repeat that behaviour. You can train yourself with classical conditioning to be a better person. It's whack. Whomst? WHOMST? In prison, they do that to assert dominance. What a crazy world we live in My family could have had acid poured on their faces, and been tortured and mutilated and scammed and .... etc.... etc.... but they didn't.... so idc. Change the word know* to think*. and ignorant mediocres have been running countries for ages. Like all politicians ever are just flawed humans like the rest of us. They don't have masterful tactical skills, intelligence, etc. They have tonnes of intel usually cause that helps, with teams of advisors, and usually above-average intelligence and vision and political knowledge. but like Trump isn't the first mortal to sit in the white house, and he isn't the last. He's helped the American economy recover, and stuff. Idk too much about your politics. But the world is improving in general. Improving like crazy! Social standards? Environment? You're worried about global warming? Why nawt try and help that situation if you want a purpose. Clean up on the weekend and stuff. Go down to some place and start cleaning. Why can't you dream? Storm clouds over a drought sounds like the drought's gonna end with a big ol rain and thunder. But like chill out. Wheremst? What room? Why not find a torch or open a window? Expression is cool. Other ways to do it than rap. Keep it real with some more thought and emotional control. A messy mind is real but it's still just messy. Be real in reality.