this online website is made up n is NOT REAL -MyZone- lol didn't know what to name it So I updated my MyZone account a couple oh hours ago, and I'm confused My name is Jessica Parker, and I'm in love with this guy called Jacob Noels Although he is a bastard, I fell in love with his smartness and friendliness, which only occurs at times. This is what happened ----------------------------------- Jessica Parker is IN LOVE. 3 hours ago · Comment · Like Terry Jackson and 9 others like this. Anna McCarter: Who's the Lucky Guy Jessie? 3 hours ago Jessica Parker Not telling 3 hours ago Anna McCarter: ....... D: 3 hours ago Nick Jagger: Jessica, don't let Jacob read this, delete it!! 2 hours ago · Like · 9 person Jessica Parker: Why so Nick? 2 hours ago Jacob Noels: Too late idiot. 2 hours ago Nick Jagger: I pity the poor boy that might get smashed to death. about an hour ago · Like · 12 person Jessica Parker: Why so Nick? 56 minutes ago Terry Jackson: Wow, Jess how DENSE can you be! *sigh* 56 minutes ago · Like · 20 person
-Next day at school (lunch)- "Jess!! Come on tell us! Who is it? That you love!" Anna pleaded whilst eating her salad sandwich. "No way I'm not gonna tell you! I have the feeling that if you see him you'll also fall in love with him!" Jessica said with a serious face as she took a bite of her ham and cheese sandwich. "Please!" Anna pleaded, flashing a puppy dog eyes. "No." Jessica said turning away from Anna's puppy dog eyes which didn't work this time. "Whoa! Indeed she IS in love!" Nick exclaimed and run out of the classroom with Jessica's blue diary. "Hey! Stop reading people's diaries!" Jessica snapped, "Shit I let my guard down for a second." And she went running after Nick. -across the room sat Jacob reading a book whilst his best mate, Richie sat beside him eating his apple- "Oh-hooo. What are you gonna do now Jacob?" Richie whispered whilst taking another bite out of his big, green apple. "Tch." Jacob gritted his teeth and buried his face with the book. -After school- After school, I signed in MyZone and saw something Why did my brother message him? And I'm not even his girlfriend, if I was I would never even dump him. I sat on my blue bed cushion and read over it again : ----------------------------------- Jacob Noels is VERY PISSED. 5 hours ago · Comment · Like Ray Parker and 6 others like this. Nick Jagger: I know why~ 5 hours ago Jacob Noels: Say a word about it and I'm gonna beat you tomorrow. 5hours ago Ray Parker: Did my sister dump you kiddo? HA! You deserve to be dumped! 5 hours ago · Like · 8 person Jacob Noels: Wanna die? 5 hours ago Ray Parker: Come at me Bro. 5 hours ago Richie Masons: Jealous much? 4 hours ago · Like · 3 person ----------------------------------- "Ra-y!!! Stop talking to my friends" I yelled at the top of my lungs "and I was never his girlfriend" I whispered closing my room door. The door opened and Rays head popped in, his dark brown hair covered his green orbs "but you wish you were" he smirked then closed the door. "Raaaay" I yelled as I ran out of my room and chased him down the stairs.
short update because I have a party today so hope it was good -next day- -Jessica Parker's pov- While walking to school, from the back cause I'm late, I climbed the really long, silver fence. As I got to the top, I glanced down and saw how far I was from the ground. "should I just climb down? Or jump?" I asked myself. Glancing down again I saw Jacob he was reading a book whilst lying down on the grass. My heart began to beat faster as he moved the book from his face and smirked. "W-What?" I stuttered as I looked at him, "nice panties, leopard print" he chuckled. I looked down at myself and realized I hadn't closed my legs while I sat on the fence "per-pervert" I quickly closed my legs but had lost my balance and fell forward. "Waaaaaah" I screamed at the top of my lungs, this is going to be painful, I shut my eyes and covered my face with my hands. -thud- I landed but I was not hurt but I was painless. I slowly opened my eyes and saw Jacob.....under me. What just happened? "Get of me leopard print, your heavy" Jacob said with a irritated face. "Oh sorry....wait WHAT?" I sat up on his stomach and argued "I-I'm not heavy" "Whatever, just get off me" he argued back whilst pushing me off. I got of and realized his right elbow got injured "Shit " I squeaked, he moved his left hand and placed it over his right bloody elbow "b-bl-blood" I was now scared "wa-wait, I have bandaids in my bag" I looked back and opened my green school bag, I placed my hand inside to the bottom and picked out my emergency kit. "You bring a emergency kit to school?" Jacob smirked as I opened it and got two Dora bandaids out. "Uh-huh, for emergencies like this" I said with my signature smile. "Dora....your not putting that on me" Jacob argued "yeah you are" I smiled as I got tissue and wiped the stained blood on his elbow "no I'm not" he blurted out again. "Please............for me?" I smiled "but I'm basically doing it for yourself so you dont lose blood and die" I chuckled whilst opening a bandaid and sticking it on his elbow "see now you look more friendly and cute" I blushed, oops I just called him cute, I'm going to die, I packed my stuff and was about to run but he grabbed my wrist and pulled me back down. "thank you" he smiled showing his perfect white teeth......... HE SMILED OH MY GEE, HIS SO HOT "you...you just smiled" I turned into a tomato with a surprised face "see if you do that you'll have more friends other than Richie" I blushed even harder, this is a dream come true. -dinnnnng- "Shit" I blurted out "I just missed first period, in Mr Martin's math class, his going to kill me" I said with a worried face. "Don't worry, lets just wag it and go watch a movie" Jacob bluntly said as he got up and dusted his grey pants "wa-wag!!!!! I have never missed one class in my life and you want me to 'wag'?" I said. "I'll buy you ice-cream" he smirked, Uh how can I refuse? "sure, your shout" I giggled I know, it's cheesy
You just need to describe more like their appearance, surroundings and posture other than that it's really good!