i looked at the clock waiting for it to be over. i tapped my pencil agenst the desk i waited. the bell rang. i headed for the door as fast as i could i ran out and into the empty playground. i could hear the creeking of the swings when the wind blew them, i knew something could go wrong anything could go wrong at anytime but i wasnt sure what. i looked over my shoulder no one or nothing was there i headed for the end of the playground to where the busy road started. i stood on the pavment and looked across to the other side of the road i saw something
spelling paragraphs capitalisation (hint for spellings either spell check it at the end or put auto correct on) more punctuation as well I agree with everyone else there but apart from that good job but it's confusing and we don't know what we are reading about.