my monolog

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_Bridget_ (01), Nov 30, 2011.

  1. Ok so for drama class we create a character for a monolog we got so I need some feed back....

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    Allergies: (please remember I didn't write the monolog my self)

    at home talking to a friend on the phone

    Um, I can't come over again. See, I have these allergies.(beat) Your mom smokes and you have cats. I'm allergic to those things.(beat) Well, cats make my eyes water and I sneeze. And smoke,well, it makes me feel like I'm gonna puke.(beat) It's not a wussy thing; it's a genuine condition. Medical. (beat) No, I'm not gonna die, but.......who wants to be sick?


    Can't we just go to my house instead? I know there are way to many people there, but-(beat) You can't be allergic to my grandma. It doesn't work like that. There is no way a doctor told you that. Believe me, I know there are to many girls at my house. I know that so well, but maybe just this once...until I can see an allergist or something? Look I'm sorry, but also my mom actually says there's no way I can come to your house.


    I'm not whipped! Your whipped!

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    Ok so can you guys please write the kind of personalities that would fit this character.....basically make a profile including:

    Name
    Age
    Socio-economic status
    Objective
    Where do you live
    Major events leading up to this point