My Loving Murderer

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rawr-Love14, Nov 27, 2011.

  1. There he is the love of my life, the person who made me feel like I was the most beautiful girl in the world.
    I look at him one last time, as the casket closes and sends him deeper in the ground. As much as I don't wanna believe that someone killed Ethan, I have to face the facts that he was murdered.
    As I start to taste more of my salty tears that are streaming down my cheeks, I feel someone grasping at my shoulders. I look to see who it is and I nearly flinch with terror.
    It was Kevin McGraw, the person who I think killed Ethan. I have been avoiding him ever since it was confirmed that Ethan was murdered.
    I quickly push his big hand off my shoulder and I tell him "Stay away from me!". As I rush to my car, I can hear Kevin following me. "Wait up, Sammy!" Kevin shouted which made me start sprinting toward my car.
    When I finally get there, Kevin comes and blocks me from the door of my car. "We need to talk it's about Ethan" he says with a cracked voice.
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    Do you guys like it? Should I continue the story yes or no? Lol I'm nervous to see if it's good!
     
  2. Bump. I wuv it 
     
  3. MOARRRRRRRRRR!!!
     
  4. More (btw blue hearts are my signature thing that's one reason why I checked this out)
     
  5. I just stood there, I felt like I was frozen right after he said Ethan's name.

    "Sammy, it's Important, I'm afraid that the killer is going to kill you next." Kevin said with tears in his eyes. "Do you know who did this?!" I shouted, I felt like I should run away and maybe if I weren't wearing heels I would.

    "Sammy you need to calm down. I want you to meet me at the park at 8:00. So I can tell you what Ethan should've told you a long time ago"
    "oh you want to meet at the park so u can KILL me too?!" I shouted back.
    I knew I just took the argument a little too far, but I'm afraid if I didn't he would never leave me alone.

    As I look up to catch his glaze, his facial expersion changed from worried into mad. "I don't care anymore! I've been trying help you, but you seem like you don't even care that the killer might be out to get you next!" he shouted with pure anger in his eyes, and with that I started to burst into tears.

    "I know that, but that doesn't mean I need your help!" I said that shaky with fear. What if the killer decides to kill me next since I have been so close to Ethan.

    All of sudden I felt a warm pair of lips brush against mine. Kevin just kissed me!!

    When the kiss ended I slapped him and ran to get to my care and drove away.
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    Hehe I updated! Should their be romance with Kevin and Sammy yes or no? Also I'm sorry that this update wasn't very exciting.
     
  6. Lol sorry for the spelling mistakes my iPod is being stupied!
     
  7. Sorry for the spelling mistakes my iPod is being stupid
     
  8. Yes.  I'm all for the romance 
     
  9. I'm going to update later today too or maybe right now since I'm still bored
     
  10. When I finally get to the drive way of my house, I rush inside and lock my self in my room.I lay my self down in my bed and i put my purple and blue covers over my head.

    What just happened?! Did Kevin really kiss me?! I can't believe he would do that to me at Ethan's funeral!

    The weirdest part of today was that I actually liked the kiss. What am I thinking?! I cant like being kissed by him, he could have killed Ethan!

    All of sudden a beep comes from my phone, it's a text message from Kevin. I don't really want to see what it says, but It could be something important.

    Right before I can check it someone knocks on my door. "Sammy you better let your best friend inside!" said a very familiar voice.

    "Jackie!" I say opening the door with a fake smile. I don't what her to know that I've been horribly sad. Jackie has bright blue eyes, black long hair, and today she decided to wear her dress she got a nordstroms with a pair of silver snake skin heels.

    "Sammie what's wrong?" she said as quickly as she saw my smile. This girl can see right through me and I guess that's why shes my best friend.

    "If I tell you, you can't tell anyone!" I say sounding nervous to tell her. She sits on my bed and puts her Couch sliver bag on floor. "I wont tell a living soul. Now sit your pretty thing down and tell little ole' me what happened".

    "Kevin kissed me!" I blurt out with my face turning red from embarrassment. "Hold the phone, he does know what you think of him, right." she said looking anxious for the answer.

    "yes he knew before he decided to smack his lips with mine" I said with a hint of anger. "well, I would like to know more but I have to go baby sitting. Bye!" said Jacky rushing out the door.

    Right after she left I quickly check the message from Kevin. It said "I'm sorry for the kiss, but you looked so.....never mind, by the way I will being talking to you at school. I'm sorry but you have no choice but to listen to me!" God I hate this guy!!!
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    Sorry for another boring update but I needed to introduce jackie. So, thumbs up or thumbs down for the story so far!
     
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