The first time I was kidnaped was about 20 kidnappings ago.It all started with a stupid packet off skittles,they're I was minding my own business sat outside KFC it was pretty dark and it was raining heavily.I was relying on this one,crazy cores,packet off skittles to bring me joy.How very wrong I was.Then a girl walked up to me and asked for a skittle,I said no and then she hit me round the head with her Prada handbag.I was knocked out cold.i woke up to a cold floor coverd in water and.....tomato ketchup? alone,with only my phone,which had no credit,for company what a fail. If u want a update post and tell me!!!
This one is really good compared to your other story?? Apart from a few spelling mistakes. And make your updates a bit longer.
Also, stealing a bag of Skittles isn't kidnapping. Driving off with an important person tied up in the trunk is kidnapping.