My Girlfriend Is A Gumiho

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -_-Kimmy-_-, Aug 10, 2011.

  1. This Story Was From A Korean Drama, But I Modified It A Little :)

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    My Girlfriend is Picture Perfect From Head To Toe... From Her Silky Caramel Hair, To Her Smooth Soft Feet. One Flaw That Concerns Me Though... Shes A Nine Tailed Fox That Was Trapped In A Painting For Centuries and Threatens To Eat My Liver If I Dont Do What She Wants. Yup, Lifes Great.

    It All Started With My Grandpa Wanting Me To Go To Military School Cause I Was Being "Spoiled" Yeah Right. I Thought Of A Plan Of How To Get Out Of This Mess.

    "Pop, Can We Take A Bathroom Break?"

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    "Fine, But Dont Take Long!"
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    We Got Out Of The Car
     
  2. Luckily There Was A Window Which I Escaped From And Hitched A Ride On A Truck, Leaving My Grandpa Confused To My Where Abouts

    /? o_O
     
  3. Car^ And Went To The Restroom^Luckily There Was A Window Which I Escaped From
     
  4. You don't need to capitalize every word.
    Jeezzz
     
  5. It's pretty good so far, please continue 
     
  6. Lol sorry I'm a grammar Nazi somewhat.
    It's a good story, I like it.
     
  7. I Guess I Fell Asleep And Woke Up At The Gas Station. It Was Pouring Out There!I Quickly Got Out Of The Truck Before The Driver Could Notice I Was There And Ran To A House Nearby. When I Went Inside, All I Saw Were Bald Monks Praying. One Of The Monks Came To Me And Told Me To Stay In The Outhouse For The Night.
    Of Course I Stayed, I Had Nowhere Else To Go So I Went To To The Outhouse And Inside Were A Bunch Of Scrolls. There Was One On The Wall That Really Stood Out.Suddenly There Was A Womens Voice Coming From Outside.
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    " I See You Like That Scroll..."
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    I Went Outside To Check But Noone Is There.

    "Its Just Some Women And A Wolf Painted On Paper. Im Not That Intrested About It."
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    "Do Me A Favor And Draw 9 Tails On The Wolf."
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    "Im Not Going To Ruin The Monks Painting."
    Suddenly There Was Lighting And The Ground Shook A Little.
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    "DO IT NOW!"
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    I Grabbed A Pen And Shook In Fear As I Drew Nine Tails On The Fox. As I Finished The Last Tail, The Fox Painting Disapeared From The Scroll.

    "What Now?"
    More Lightning Occured And I Was Hit With A Bat On The Head. I Fell Hard On The Ground As I Blacked Out.
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    "Goodnight"

    <More To Come Tomorrow>
     
  8. Caps...




    Hard for us to read...









    And I'm a jewish COP.





     
  9. GUMIHOYES! A korean story!