Yeah yeah I'm new to this don't hate -----------—-------------—----------—------- A small child walks through the woods unsure of where she's going. She just knows that she has to keep going unaware of the creatures around her, watching her. Little did she know, she will become one of them one day. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please comment ideas thanks lovies
Try and make the post longer, a bit of detail as well. For example, maybe describe the child and the surroundings.
The child, Emily, is 10 years walking alone in the haunted forest. Every tree looks the same, as if eyes are on them watching Emily walk around alone. In one of the trees sits the Demon Queen, Mulan, dressed in her black dress with lace at the ends. Mulan watches Emily then disappears. Hearing a noise from the trees, Emily looks around "H..hello??" Her voice shakes. A small cat jumps out of a bush making Emily jump and fall backwards. The cat walks closer to Emily not wanting to frighten her. Emily backs into a tree "Please I'm just lost and I just wanna go home." The cat looks at Emily and forms into a human. The strange cat person speaks softly "Do not fret dear one. I am Yumi. The Neko Queen" Yumi sits in front of Emily. Emily looks up at her and smiles a little.
Good job ems keep it going it seems that my club members know how to make a really good story especially yumi and ele
Yumi gets up and runs away leaving Emily sitting under the tree alone. Emily looks around "Y.Yumi?" She slowly gets up and starts walking around again. She thinks ~why did I leave my best friend back at camp? Everyone must be worried about me by now~ Emily wipes her eyes and decides to keep walking. Mulan, the Demon Queen, starts watching her again and smiles. Mulan looks for someone important, John, the Werewolf King. Unaware I what's going on, Emily finds a cave to sleep in for the night. ~Mulan's P.O.V~ Watching this little girl, whoever she is, makes me think of something. Mulan finds John nearby "John, there's a youngin' out there who seems to be lost. She has potential to be one of us" John nods and forms into a large black wolf and walks off.
~Regular P.O.V.~ Emily finds a dry spot in the cave and lays down. John slips into the cave and circles the half asleep Emily. John gets closer and breaths down her neck. Emily jumps and screams scrambling back away from John. John stands there blending in the darkness of the cave. Emily stays against the wall and says "who's there?" John stays still and stays quiet. Emily, still unaware he's there, lays back down and soon falls asleep. As Emily sleeps, John watches her over night.
~John's P.O.V~ ~As I'm watching this little girl it almost kills me to see her so frightened. I want to make her feel welcomed. I will make her feel welcomed~ Gets up and lays a ways away from Emily keeping an eye on her. ~Dream P.O.V~ "Help!! Help me please!!" Fire surrounds me as I stand on a boulder. I see all different kinds of shapes and figures around me. As I look around I feel pain in my body. I scream out crying pleading for help. I look up to a big black figure and it says demonically "Welcome to the Family"