Sady Le'nerro. Only a few words could describe Sady and those words were she was: 1.Complex- she had so many layers waiting for someone to peel away. 2. Gorgeous- She had Golden hair that curled off wildly, she was 5'5 and weighed 120 with beautiful blue eyes. She was what you called Megan fox gorgeous. 3. She was Mike and Sean Le'nerros little 'Sister'- which meaning scared almost every guy away. Mike was the oldest and played football QB he was a senior, and Sean was a hockey player and my best friend. We were sophomores barely. And if you noticed each word had so many meanings, had so much behind them. The last word Sister the one with the most meaning. Yes I was in love with my best friends sister. But anyone with a brain would love this gorgeous girl. And you ask who I was? The answer is simple. My name is Seth Delgado and I was in love with Sady. That was the only meaning my life had and she was it. Seth P.O.V. She bounced up around the trampoline her hair flying around her perfect face. She smiled so widely her I thought it was probably bigger than her face. Was she really this happy for a trampoline? She flopped down her head in my lap as her olive skin showed. Why did she tease me? Especially today she was wearing one of my Tee-shirts and shorts. Yet only in a way Sady could made them look incredible and sexy. She ran her hand down my abs and to my face. She got up quickly, smiling at me nervously. "Are you trying to seduce me?"I asked a small smirk on my face. Her eyes got wide as she jumped up her hands on her hips. She stared at me and laughed. "Seduce you? Please I mean just look at me I can have who I want,when I want" she said in her most snobbish voice. Then she bent over and laughed her ringing laugh. I heard her snort and laughed as hard as I could. She stared at me, her face bright red. I looked at her and opened my arms. "Your as red as a tomato, need a hug" " no I do not!" she said defiantly but trotted over and sat on my lap. She laid her head on my shoulder as I hugged her tight. "you know, you really are gorgeous"I muttered my head on her shoulder. "please, you don't have to lie. I've never been pretty" she said sniffling. She bounced up, and I wondered how a girl as beautiful as he could be so insecure. "weres my brother, you said he'd be here" she said as she tried to climb up the trampoline side. She was unsuccessful. I went to her pushing her up by her butt. " he said he'd be here, probably picking up a few friends" I climbed up easily and bounced with her as she flipped. She jumped to me grabbing my hands and jumped to her butt as she sat down. " Seth what's highschool like" "well its different,there's alot of people and you love it and they'll love you" "what are the girls like? Are they pretty or slutty or both" " well there's all of those that you described" "Seth I have to tell you something and promise not to laugh" "I swear on everything I love I won't laugh" "is it sad I haven't had my first kiss" I stared at her a little shocked. Her luscious lips pressed in a worried frown. I put my hand on her face softly. "no it's not why" "because everyone elsa has, why not me! Can you do me a favor" "ya whatever it is I'll do it" "Can you kiss me?" I stared at her and leaned in slowly, my lips pressing hers softly. I kissed her harder as I heard a clatter and yells. She pulled back staring at me. She blushed and ran to the door opening it as her brother and the whole hockey team came in. Her face looked like she was about to cry. She slipped thru the door leaving me there. Gaping at the spot she just was. Then the party started as more people slipped in. First FanFiction Tell me what you guys think?
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Sady P.O.V. I touched my tingling lips gently, electric running through them. What was that! What was wrong with me,why would I ask that. He was my best friend, I loved him like a brother. Just a brother and nothing else. I walked hurriedly to a random room,kicking a table as something ricocheted back hitting me. I let myself drop to the floor, and put my head in my hands. "I'm such a mess right now, just breathe sady" My head shot up as a new thought hit me. "omg he's my brothers best friend!" I said to loudly. Sean would kill me and Seth if he ever found out. I stood up fixing myself as I walked out of the room bumping into something. I flew back landing on my head first. I laid there my mind muggy. I opened my eyes staring at the dizzy figure above me. "Hey are you okay?" I blinked and stared at the handsome figure above me. He had short blonde hair that matched his manly face. He had brown eyes that stunned me. He stood up lifting me by my waist. I held onto his broad shoulders, as my head spun. "hey my name is Brendan and I'm sorry" "No it's fine my name is Sady" "that's a really pretty name for a pretty-....… I mean do you wanna come to the party with me" I smiled at him sweetly and nodded my head. He put his hand on the small of my back leading me to the party. As I walked in it already smelled of beer and sweat. Music blared loudly as girls jumped on the trampoline and people danced around it. "Woah it's really loud in here"I screamed making my way to the punch table. He followed behind me closely. "do you want to dance"he said in my ear. I shook a little the feel of his breath on my neck. I nodded my head as he grabbed my hand. We danced for hours, finally I got tired my hands on his shoulders. I leaned on him closely as a slow song came on. I looked up at his face as he smiled his hands slipping around my waist pulling me close. I laid my head on his neck, letting the music take me. Settle down with me Cover me up Cuddle me in Lie down with me Hold me in your arms Your heart's against my chest Lips pressed to my neck I've fallen for your eyes But they don't know me yet And the feeling I forget I'm in love now Kiss me like you wanna be loved Wanna be loved Wanna be loved This feels like I've fallen in love Fallen in love Fallen in love Settle down with me And I'll be your safety You'll be my lady I was made to keep your body warm But I'm cold as, the wind blows So hold me in your arms [ Lyrics from: http://www.lyricsfreak.com/e/ed sheeran/kiss me_20983414.html ] My heart's against your chest Your lips pressed to my neck I've fallen for your eyes But they don't know me yet And the feeling I forget I'm in love now Kiss me like you wanna be loved Wanna be loved Wanna be loved This feels like I've fallen in love Fallen in love Fallen in love Yeah I've been feeling everything From hate to love From love to lust From lust to truth I guess that's how I know you So hold you close To help you give it up So kiss me like you wanna be loved Wanna be loved Wanna be loved This feels like I've fallen in love Fallen in love Fallen in love So kiss me like you wanna be loved Wanna be loved Wanna be loved This feels like I've fallen in love Fallen in love Fallen in love The song ended as he leaned in and kissed me. I kissed him back as I lost my breathe but didn't care. He pulled back as I gasped m, staring in his eyes. He smiled and moved in again. I kissed him this time but pulled back as someone grabbed my shoulder. I stared at Mikey behind me, his usual friendly smile gone. I pulled back a little as Mikey put his hand out. "Hey I'm Mikey and that's my little sister" "um hi my name is Brendan and I like your little sister, like ALOT" "ya look that's all good but keep your hands to yourself" Mikey moved away as I looked at Brendan my face hot and red. " oh my I'm so sorry, I guess you don't like me as much do you?" "of course I do why wouldn't I" "Because most guys run when my brothers come" He grabbed my face in his hands. " I'm not other guys" he said penetrating each word with a small kiss. He grabbed my hand scribbling a number on it. "call me okay, I have to go"he said kissing me again one last time. He ran off leaving me there in the sea of people. This really could be the start of something new. Of something great. I turned around to my brother and his friend staring at me. I knew I was going to get yelled at but I didn't care at a moment like this who would.