It is a warm morning. The sun is shining brightly through trees. A little boy named Liam woke up and ran outside. Liam suddenly fell over a rock which supposedly was a button. First a flash of light and then a totally different world. Candy, Chocolate, Lollipops were everywhere! A pretty girl aged 12 came up to Liam and told him the wonders of the place he was in. It was called Manadu! Manadu is a place of sharing and kindness. She couldn't wait to be his guide. Because after you guide someone you become a magical person, like a fairy or a wizard. We walked around fighting some people as she had a problem with the people in Manadu. She thanked me for helping her. As the day went on I asked her so many questions like if the candy was edible.
._. Ok first it's Liam. Third person narrative. Then it's 'me'. First person narrative. Ehem. Do you have multiple personality disorders, or are you just obsessed with Liam?
Hey. I can't be bothered writing Liam continuously. People understand what I mean. I will continue the story using third person.
It's ment to be a kid story. All the stories I have read are about love. So I made it something we related to as we were a child. I got some of the ideas from Alice in Wonderland
I thought people might want a change Candy. all the stories I have read are love stories. Candy, I know you are going to be rude on all my stories. Please Stop.