Magic Vs. Blood

Hi! It's Anime! This is my first story on Fanfic so sorry if it isn't good Well... Here goes nothing!
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[Dream sequence]
I walked out from the dark, empty crypt. From the shadows came a cold, empty howl that sent chills running up my spine. My walk came into a clearing where the howls were echoing all around me. I watched as four figured came into view. It was my master Juniper, mother, father and... Xavier.
Their eyes a glowing gold and their chins and lips stained with blood. "How does it feel to be one of us?" Xavier whispered his voice chilling like ice. I stepped away tears stinging my eyes.
"I'll never be like you..." Xavier grinned and revealed fangs stained red with blood. The smell of the blood reached me and overpowered my senses.
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so far so good?

 

The sequence isn't over but should I continue?

 

I'm going to finish the dream sequence.
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"But you already are." Xavier gestured to me. "How then can you explain your eyes and those teeth?" I put my hand to my mouth and poked at my canines. They felt razor sharp.
Xavier's smile was really pissing me off now. Xavier smiled "Not concinced, then let me shiw you." He pulled my arm and lead me to a small pond. "Go on... Look in it." I was hesistating at first. But, xavier kept gesturing to the pond. I leaned in and gasped at my reflection. My eyes were no longer their emerald green... But a glowing gold.
I collapsed and began to cry, feeling the dread and horror flow through my body. Then everything went black.
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Done with the dream sequence

 

Lol you got my name right and shall I continue?

 

Hahaha lol it's different vampire differ depending on their authors taste... Vamps in mine can see theselves

 

Lol i only have like two readers ugh

 

Adam!!!!!!

 

You know my name!!!!!

 

Lol