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Baby-Bri1

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Okay so I write lots of lyrics but I'm not sure if I like this one do tell me what you think.
Blue is the ocean, reflects off the sky. Blue is a child's tear waving good bye. Blue is a family member that has already passed. Blue is a raindrop falling down fast. Blue is the world on a rainy day, but yellow is the rainbow, when the storm clears away! :)



P.s I want to read lyrics you write too so if you write lyrics please post them!
 
Haha my friend wanted to see if I could make a song with the word blue in almost every sentence so I did and I won the bet plus she goes on this app that why I posted it here
 
"Raindrop falling down fast" Amateur vibe right there. You should try to change the yellow, or even try walking away from the colors.
 
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