Hey all you PiMD singers and songwriters this thread was made because of another songwriter showed me his lyrics, and another young lady wanted to show off her lyrics but didn't. This is for all songwriters to post and talk about their lyrics and others. Friendly advice only no "you suck" or "leave" comments! Have fun all and i will Be checking regularly
I feel the sickness rising, oh god what have I done, my sick and twisted nightmares, have got me on the run. I need to find somewhere to sleep, somewhere to hide. I need to That it is alright before she died! (help me stay).. Dont run away, don't run away, just let me help yea it'll be ok. Just stop and breathe just stop and breathe, I can save you from this evil andwicked deed. So now I see, I see you cry cry cry and watch the evidence of disaster die. Where are you now I wonder, I see the black of night oh god it's creeping closer -when you stab me in my heart!- my life and all we were is now slowly falling apart. Don't run away, don't run away, just let me help yea it'll be ok. Just stop and breathe just stop and breathe, I can save you from this evil andwicked deed. So now I see, I see you cry cry cry and watch the evidence of disaster die. -I watch it die! Ohhh I watch it die! I watch us dieeeeee!-
A start I'm working on... You left me stranded without a signal. You left me broken without the pieces. Now I'm trying to get back, but I feel defeated.
I have one I'm still working on, I will post it when I have enough of it to have a little insight on it.)
You're eyes, You're smile, You've had me mesmerized. Your kiss, those lips it was hard hard not believe I was in heaven, heaven. But I checked your phone and saw her, that's right I checked your phone and found out it was all a game. Yea it was all a game. ...that's it for now...
Very good Gracie. With time that has the potential to be a great song I know how where ur coming from like I did with Adam's love sucks that's for sure
Ok I decided to trash the one I was working but this one is one that I started about a month ago and I'm stuck on it so I'm looking for help. [verse 1] I know I'm supposed to hate it I know I'm supposed to be in pain But every living moment I don't regret a single thing There's nothing you can do to change my mind. You know it's all up too me and what I decide [refrain] I'm better without you, you know it's true I hate when they say it's me and not you Sometimes you have to take what life throws at you and make the best of it. Sometimes I feel like I'm drowning But then I feel like I'm flying Because I don't need you anymore. Oh oh oh oh oh oh That's all I have. I wish you could hear what it's sounds like. I kind of have a bridge but I don't have anything for the second verse. I'm proud of it considering my age.
How old are you? And it's very good Lindsey I like it I actually sang it with a couple different rhythms and I and everyone else here might be able to help you out. Is it ok if I suggest some changes?
And If you dont like the changes or if u don't want me to give them you have full permission to tell me to go fuck myself lol
I'm more of a rapper well this is about a girl who backstabbed me but this is just the intro Fake as friends, Friendships always ends. Tears and pain, That's all I gain. Your lies, Never once believed in your cries. But most of all, How come I'm the one who always takes the fall.