Chapter 1 My annoying alarm clock rings. "Ugh" I groan. I force myself out of bed and slowly walks to the bathroom. I start to brush my teeth and then I start hearing footsteps and screaming. I sighed. "They must be awake now" I said. I hollered. "Stop making that noise and get dressed for school." I finishes brushing my teeth I put on my pre-ripped jeans and a I slipped on my red work shirt that had Sally's Sweets on it in big pink and baby blue letters. I pull my hair back and tie it into a ponytail and then I starts putting on my red and black Adidas. I walk out the bathroom and goes downstairs and walks into the kitchen. I grab two bowls and two packs of pop-tarts. I put the bowls on the table and pour fruit-loops into them. Then I put the pop-tarts in the toaster. I took the milk from the fridge and poured it into the bowls an into two cups. The pop-tarts finally finished an I put two of them on a paper towel and the other two on a paper towel. "Breakfast ready" I shouted. Two of them came running down stairs and ran to me. Hannah came down stairs after and sat at the table and began to eat the pop-tart. "Big sis Max tried to hurt me again" cried my little sister Lucy and she began pulling on my shirt. "Max, don't ever do that to your sister again when you come back home your going to be in the time out corner" I said. Hannah finishes her pop-tart and milk then got up from the table and threw away the paper towel and the put the cup in the sink. "Is mom and dad ever going to come back for us" she asked. I nodded. "I believe they will it won't be like them to leave us." I said. Hannah nodded. "I'll go prepare the baby bag" Hannah said. She walked out the kitchen and went to the baby room. I took the baby's bottle out of the cabinet and started to fix the baby's milk. Lucy and Max sat down at the table and ate their cereal quietly. I could tell they were sad about mom and dad. I ate my pop tart and drinked my milk. Hannah then came back downstairs with the baby's bag and I started to put the baby's food in the bag. I took out my phone and dialed my Aunt's number. "Hello" I said. "Hey Aunt Cindy I'm bout to go to work so you can come now" I said. I nodded then hanged up. "Okay guys Aunt Cindy is on her way is the baby still sleep Hannah" I asked. She nodded. Lucy and Max finished their cereal and they put it in the sink and ran upstairs I change into their uniforms. I went back upstairs to my room and stood in front of the mirror. I started to apply lip gloss and some light red eye shadow. I took the keys off the dresser and I put it in my pocket and left out my room. Lucy and Max came back down stairs and went outside to wait for Aunt Cindy. I sighed and looked out the window. "I hope they do come back" I whispered. Hannah took the baby bag off the table put her school bag on her back and walked over to me. "Sister your not alone I miss them too" Hannah said. That's it for chapter 1 of love story first time writing. Story so comment down below if you like and comment ways to help me improve it and ill update soon
It's nice, Just better grammer and more emotion, just feels like you wrote it like "blah.." But, its really nice! I like it
Chapter 2 Lucy was carrying the bag and Max kept trying to pull her pigtails."Stop it!" she cried.I glanced at Max and he apologized to Lucy and helped her hold the baby's bag. The doorbell ranged and it was Aunt Cindy. Lucy and Max jumped up and down around their aunt. She smiled at me and handed me 50$. "Thank you Aunt Cindy" I said. "Don't thank me thats just your daily allowance." Aunt Cindy said. Hannah greeted her aunt with a polite smile and took Toby to the car. Aunt Cindy bent down and handed Lucy and Max 5$. "Aww why don't we get as much as her" Max complained. I looked down at them. "Because all you guys do is spend your money on candy, while I try to save up for a car" I explained."I understand" Max said. I dialed my best friend's number and told her to come pick me up. "I can give you a ride sugar plum" Aunt Cindy said. "You don't have too besides you don't have enough room in the car." I replied. "Well okay then,if you say so, but I'm still picking you up from work." Aunt Cindy said. I laughed a little and said 'fine' guys do is spend your money on candy, while I try to save up for a car" I explained."I understand" Max said. I dialed my best friend's number and told her to come pick me up. "I can give you a ride sugar plum" Aunt Cindy said. "You don't have too besides you don't have enough room in the car." I replied. "Well okay then,if you say so, but I'm still picking you up from work." Aunt Cindy said. I laughed a little and said 'fine'. So sorry that its a little to short buts that only a little short the next chapter will be even longer