Lost love.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *zurmonium (01), Jun 11, 2011.

  1. Seems to be an okay day for Jamie.
    It was about 2o'clock when it all started......

    ..."I'm going on vaca!" she had yelled with excitement. Across the room came , down the hall was Justin.
    "am I coming , I mean I am your soon to be husband. Right?" she replied with a smile and a nod.
    They started packing..

    12 hours later......


    "Okay! Ladies and gents! We are preparing for a landing , please buckle your set-belts!"
    Click...click click click..click..



    "Justin.... The plane isn't near the airport...."
    "oh Jamie , baby doll, don't worry"

    "Justin.... We're going down... Over a jungle.."


    Screams of panic started as soon as everyone realized they could die in this plane crash...
     
  2. Huh?

    JK, good start
     
  3.  LOVE IT MOAR<3
     
  4. .. As they were going down babies were crying...etc.

    Jamie reached to Justin in helpless action of reassurance.

    Boom.. It crash..

    "HELP HELP HELP!!!" a lady screamed.. She was on fire..

    Jamie cried and cried for Justin.
    "Justin!! Where are you?! Justin!! I LOVE YOU!!"

    Everything was quiet...
    But the sounds of fire and the horrible smell of burning flesh..

    The fire was still strong. Jamie ran back in...

    Justin was no where to be found...
     
  5. I didn't read it but I know it's good
     
  6. Did Jamie leave the plane yet?
     
  7. No se hasn't. I need names for more characters.
     
  8. Can I be in it!!! You already know what I look like and all that
     
  9. Holy I'm in the story?Yeahhh !!!
     
  10. Later that night...

    Quiet..

    Scornful silence.

    Sadness of death..


    All alone Jamie sat.

    "it's so quiet.. But I'm so lonely. On the bright side this fire is keeping from freezing in the dark misk of this jungle"
    What a strange island , she thought.


    The coo coo of an owl.. Or so it was...

    "what was that..."

    Coo coo . There it went again


    Coo coo
    "WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT DO YOU WANT!!!!"

    Coo coo

    No answer just the silence screams of death yet eerie coo coo-ingz
     
  11. Awwww it's only an owl 
     
  12. ... Or it could be Charlie hah jk
     
  13. Mwahahahahahaha IM THE COOCOOKILLER
     
  14. Lol it's good
     
  15. She began looking for the coo coo noise maker...

    She traveled deep into the forest away from the plane..

    Coo Coo..
    "what is that gos darn thing!!"

    Coo coo c c coo
    "Oh , so your laughing at me!!"

    Coo coo

    "shut up"

    Coooooo

    She looked up, there it was..
    Ita huge. It has horns and wings,and is brown with red eyes.
    Coo coo.

    "ugh, your ugly"

    Coooooo.

    A beast to be made ugly for another being to see it's inner beauty, he used to be handsome.

    "So coo coo, what could I call you?"

    Cooo Cooo.

    "stephanie?"
    Co co.
    "no? How about Charlie?"

    He jumped for joy flew above the tree tops and came back Down and said
    Coo coo..

    "okay Charlie, if there are other people like me.take me to them.."

    Coo Cooo..

    He left..


    She followed...
     
  16.  MOAR PLEASE :D